thank you for the upload !

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She looks a lot like an older Asuna though

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this is probably one of the more realistic character dynamics ive read in a doujin...

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Or. How about...you break up? Maybe?

God, this whole "don't rock the boat" mentality is stupid.

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Damn I got too caught up in the story I forgot to fap.

Huge fan of the outfits and the writing is really quite good.

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what a pain in the ass.

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A perfect example of a toxic relation: The protagonist is not interested in the feelings of the short-haired girl, nor does he ever say what he wants (that also goes for the long-haired girl, although in a lesser way), everything is fixed with a ring. Much hypocrisy … the best is art, because history is …..
And I don’t know why but if this story has a continuation, it would be a sex scene before she gets married and with the dress. Write it down if I guess.

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They're all fucked up.

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Yeah everyone sucks. MC is wasting other girl's time and main girl doesn't just break up. Even though other girl did cheat, I respect her for coming clean. Take's a genuine person to do that. Plus MC didn't give a single shit. Other dude seems like the opportunist type so he'll cheat again if a chance arises. In the end it'll all end in disaster as MC is waiting for main girl to eventually dump other dude and MC will then dump other girl.

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Wow this is really good.
The characters portray a lot of nuisance, they are flawed but in a very believable way.
And that scene where she gets mad, but the bed is soaked with love fluids and even her own buttcheeks are dripping with it, that scene sure is something.
All accompanied by a very erotic and detailed semi realistic anime artstyle.

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Till page 43, It might be one of the most realistic plots i've read in hentai:
- MC falls in love with the FMC, but she starts dating some other dude, so he tries to move on by starting to date another girl, but his feelings towards her are all wishy-washy so his girlfriend feels insecure and ends up cheating with the FMC's boyfriend. MC wants to use the opportunity that the FMC is feeling down because of the cheating to get closer to the FMC and confess his feelings, but ends up getting rejected because all she wanted was to get even so she cant truly forgive them.

I think he should have told about how he felt while they were talking. He should have told her about how he wasnt really that hurt about what happened since he just dated that girl to move because he actually liked her since they first met. The possibilities of him getting sex would have much lower since it would have been no longer revenge sex, but if by chance things progressed into sex the "aftermatch" would have been much different since she would have done it knowing how he felt and not just to have revenge sex and then getting suddenly cofessed, since a confession after sex isnt the best idea, especially when your partner is in a totally different kind of mindset than you.

Everything that happens after page 43 feels like the kinda fucked up thing we see in hentai:
- The boyfriend continues cheating and the FMC uses the MC to get even on him while his girlfriend is living a total lie. Not saying that it cant happen in reality, since there are a lot of people with fucked up relationships.

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This is soooo unrealistic. Thats not how you write a story, dumb author lol.
This story will be better if a chad ugly bastard with gazillion money and a dick as big as a black man arm suddenly appear and mind trick the ladies by swinging his dick around and all the girls start getting horny and rape him. All of them got pregnant with the ugly chad bastard and live happily ever after.

Last edited on 02 October 2022, 07:42.

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