Folder LInk: [https://aryion.com/g4/view/646501]

The plot is certainly interesting, scatalogy haters aside.
But the translation is such pure garbage I can't even be assed to bookmark this in the hopes it get another TL one day.

Base +7, umakeisee +6, alferezkururu966 +16, fatman18 +6, goodeats1337 +6, Darknessend +6, a10112 +6, crushxtreame +6, Bio Folf +6

Translation leaves a lot to be desired. (?) indicates there's an error, but I'm not sure what's supposed to be written instead.

Page 3: before right now > first
Page 4: Just think > Just thinking
bugged lizard (?) > annoying lizard (?)
I can't stand to eat anymore (?) > I can't stand waiting any longer (?)
as same as chicken > the same as chicken
Page 5: Be happy for has been accepted to be one of these delicious foods > Be happy to be accepted as one of these delicious dishes
This makes me can't decide the eating order > Clearly wrong, probably "They look so good I can't even decide what to eat first"
And don't forget to tortured appreciate with my enzyme (?) > And don't forget to appreciate getting tortured by my enymes (?)
Page 6: relax and sleepy when I'm not doubtful (?) >relaxed and sleepy when I'm full (?)
relief and stuff at the same time > Makes no sense, don't know what you were trying to say there.
Nothing will be better than > Nothing beats that (?)
Page 7: while Veera wants to eat me all the time > around Veery who wants to eat me all the time
Page 8: I am downsized after I fell in here > I shrunk after falling in here
Good for you. I am a kindness guy > Luckily for you, I'm a kind guy
by the same way, may be > the same way, maybe
Searching "EXIT GATE" > searching the "EXIT GATE"

That's just five pages and we're already way past the required amount for the misc:"poor grammar" tag and I could keep going, if there's any chance it will be fixed. Was this "translation" provided by the author? Otherwise it must be tagged as misc:"poor grammar". Judging by the comments over at Eka's, they had someone else do it, so I'll tag it. If anyone can verify it was the author themselves, I'll withdraw the tag.

Base +9, fatman18 +6, bananaramadama-sama +7, Glovelove. +7, cogbrown +6, laptopsuc +7, gmcannon_88 +6, a10112 +6

wtf is going on

Base +6, bananaramadama-sama +7, Darknessend +6, FapMoon +6, made2see2000 +7

what the fuck did I just read

Base +11, Kantzakolt +6, HentaiXD +9, alexApert +6

this would be easier if kept in japanese

Base +5, unperro +5, zdycham -7

All the things everyone else said plus the dingus uploader downloaded the lower resolution previews

Base +7

before page4 sth were missed

Base +1