Oh fuck, the english translation is up, thank you so much!

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I came here to laugh. Was not disappointed.

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In my heart i want to believe ONE took another alias to draw this.

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@Bastemorphus so I'm not alone in thinking he's behind these? Because holy shit, I've been suspecting/hoping it is the case.

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@Bastemorphus

Agreed. I feel like the One Punch Man hentai doujinshi are some of the most indistinguishable from their official manga counterparts. Really nice attention to detail, especially in the One Hurricane series, and I believe there are some non-h doujinshi in this series as well to act as bridges between the different issues.

Do-S kind-of reminded me of previous characters like Lust from FMA/FMA: Brotherhood where they are incredibly threatening and deadly antagonists/villains who use lust and sexual appeal as part of their danger factor.

Editing Note: There seems to be a minor mistake with the last page's bottom right dialogue bubble. A white line erases the English translation.

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Now I just want the monster lady back in the actual manga. Didn't she die?

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@Bastemorphus You're thinking of Yusuke Murata, ONE did the original web comic.

Also I wouldn't put it past Murata to do something like this since he seems to really like drawing the female characters in OPM especially Fubuki.

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@Ineedanadult

That is correct. I believe she was killed by Amai Mask during the raid on the Monster Association. Shame since she and Psykos are perfect villain rivals for someone like Fubuki.

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Now here im hoping Do-s becomes SO entralled by the power of saitama that she just looks for excuses so he fucks her over and over, that would be hilariously fun to se

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@hentailover6983
In the redraws, she survives and has a rematch with Fubuki.

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I was resigned to beating off to Jinx from League of Legends for the third time today, but then I saw this.

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This one get the dialogue quality of the original, holy shit...

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@Bastemorphus ONE can't draw for sh!t, Murata is the art king

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I definitely believe this is the work of Yusuke Murata, if its another person he'd be really godly at imitating the artstyle.

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Are we just gonna ignore how One Punch Man just said it hurts?

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Wait... BLACK hair ?

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This could fit in perfectly with the regular manga. Amazing. This was written by somebody who truly enjoys the source material, and they're not just riding along on a popular franchise.

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@Naruto0116
Saitama can feel pain. He got scratched by a cat in the face and felt it. I guess if he doesn't expect the attack coming and doesn't have time to steel himself, he can feel it, since he's taken a dip in lava and withstood the freezing temperatures of space just fine.

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no climax orz

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Saitama is such a Chad. Even his dick is invulnerable.

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So this is canon, right?

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Hoping he draws a Psykos chapter eventually

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@skeloperch

but space isn't cold, it's a vacuum

plus the kick that launched him spaceward, the air friction would leave him feeling rather hot, and being unble to shed the heat, due to vaccuum

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1. The typesetter used an already edit Korean translation instead of the Japanese raws, which looks funny because some of the Korean text is still there.

2. Sadly, for some reason instead of making proper redrawing and editing, a lot of the things is just hidden by white bars. This becomes extra noticeable on the last page where some the typesetter accidentally placed the white bar on top of the translated text, partly hiding it.

3. There are actually more than a couple of translation errors, or rather things left out. As an example on the first page where Saitama stops himself, the reason Fubuki is so angry is because Saitama said:

"She's a girl, so I don't think she would appreciate having her guts splattered everywhere"

To which Fubuki responds that she didn't appreciate being tortured. Basically the joke is that girls would be embarrassed about what is inside their body being seen and them not looking good. Fubuki pointed out that she wasn't given this consideration by Do-S.
The end dialogue with Saitama has him say that that he prefer "black hair over blondes after all". This joke seems to be about Genos? Also, Do-S hair got burn and made into charcoal.

4. Page 24... So was she a virgin or not? Seems like this page should actually come almost directly after page the upper panel of page 16. She sat down there then all of a sudden she was showing her ass to him? The bottom half of page 16 matches up with the panel on page 15... So it is a a mess.

Urgh... I guess I'll try and rework the panels or something later do that they make more sense?

Last edited on 10 June 2024, 23:46.

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@Ilyia
shut up, up to here you also come to complain, but now for something already translated.

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@mister nugget
Are you a stalker nugget? Careful, your "crazy" is showing.

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Pals...ONE can't draw to save his life, Murata is the one drawin One Punch Man, of course under ONE directions for the story.
For who doesn't know Murata is Eyeshield 21 artist, after that serie he did smaller works and returned on the scene with OPM, that received a lot of popularity thanks to a good story and good artstyle.
This hentai author is pretty good but is certainly neither of the 2, it doesn't have that "impact", for who thinks that with a art like this it have to be Murata I just say this, OPM redraw is 10 years old, some artists could have decided to imitate it or got influenced by it, a decade of tries would bring someone to this.
It could of course be a Murata assistant.
Just be happy he is around and jon me in praying he makes other OPM DJ with other heroines, like tank top girl or the medalist.

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