prequal to /g/2066676/cf3184096a/, as evidenced by the fact their daughters name is "Mona", the same name as the girl in the other story.

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This is good MC

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what a nice elf story that doesnt have a bad end

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OK. while I'm disturbed by him basically raping a comotose girl, I will accept him as a good man if his ultimate goal was to get her pregnant so she'd leave the priesthood because it was killing her.

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finally, an elf comic that ends on a good note.

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fuck the church :)

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Not to be ungrateful,but does anyone can PR if this translation is legit?

Sound to me this look like Google translation. Like the butler calls her Hannah-sama at first (I checked the raw), but this translation only go with Hannah.

Not to mention the font kinda annoying.

For a fan of sleeping sex like me, this is so sad.

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@Otaku1111989 Yes, if you haven't noticed by now "sama" is not a word in the english language. I just discovered how to download fonts, so I'm sorry for the inconvenience with my past translations.

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@impregnationlover: Many scanlation groups tend to keep Japanese honorifics. If you can't do that, just go with "miss".

And glad to hear about the font issue. Hope you can remake these translations one day.

Finally, I apologize if my words sound rude.

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@Otaku1111989 It's safe to assume that the translation is very liberal at best and a rewrite at worst based on his previous uploads

/g/2054439/d9052dbd21/
/g/2041862/1da2791291/
Read Ass Spanker, cutegyaru and Daruna's comments if you want a more in depth review of past rewrites

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@funk_u_up Thanks. I did not know that this guy is just another Laruffy.

I take back what I said above. To hell with this rewrite shit!

Way to kill the others' mood and motivation to translate.

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Honestly I don't care about the translation quality. As long as the girl is as cute as she is devoid of consciousness

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