Source: /g/2059007/7d70f1637f/

In progress translation from me. If you find any grammatical errors or got a suggestion on the type setting/better font, don't be afraid to comment on them.

I deliberately changed some of the font color to blue to indicate that it's one of the males, not the Rei-ish character. (By using the color shown on one of the moaning bubbles on Page 8).

Note: In case someone else is translating this and has gotten further, please send me an email. Either I can stop or we could perhaps collaborate.

Note 2: Yes, I de-censor words. I'm sorry (not) if I made the males into boys (which was clear from the get go anyways).

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User comment replies:

@meow_pao: Thanks, I should've caught some of these myself, but i'm just too quick at times.

@RaLz-: I will try do the ones that have actual sentences or meaning in them.

Mogunami never died, she just got her hair done

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@q91: could you also translate the speech bubbles (moans) ? thanks in advance for the good work !

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love someone like Mogudan love Ayanami Rei

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Here's a proofread version of your translation. Feel free to use it if you plan on updating this gallery.

P1
"I'm at a private beach", not "I'm a private beach".
"Ever since I had a sexual relationship", not "Ever since having a sexual relationship".

P2
"Made", not "makde".
"Even after having fucked both of us" or "the two of us", not "the both of us".
"Too late to feel", not "to late to feel"
"I spent all night fucking them" or "I fucked them all night long", not "I spent fucking with them all night long".

P3
"Take off", not "take of".

P4
"On the lower halves of their bodies", not "on the lower half of their bodies".

P5
"Out of hand", not "out of hands".

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thank you!

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If some tyranical dictator (for whatever reason) ever banned evangelion and all forms of its derivative porn, I'm conviced that Mogudan will be at the frontmost leading rebellion to keep his Mogunami alive.

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I took a look at the last two pages of your latest update, and there are still some minor errors in them:

P16
"My nipples always stand out more than usual", not "My nipples always stands out more than usual".

P17
"I tighten my pussy so I can wring out even more semen" or "I tightened my pussy so I could wring out even more semen", not "I tighten my pussy so I could wring out even more semen".

If you plan to release translations on a regular basis, I strongly recommend that you team up with a proofreader who can go over your works.

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Pictures of a Rei-ish Character

Somehow I find this rather frank admission really funny

"okay , I admit it. It's not really Rei , ....but kind-of like Rei?"

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He obeyed the letter(not the spirit) of a recent order that was overturned. EVA porn was blocked for a short period for the release of a new EVA movie, and Gainax came down hard on people.

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Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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Ella no es Rei Ayanami, es otra chica parecida, eso dujo Mogudan.

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