Part 1: ---> Here! <----
Part 2: /g/2072376/8140eddd53/
Part 3: /g/2072377/1ba6a47c5e/

Tthank you for translating the whole futanari books!

RAW: /g/1454338/6d5259ea58/

edit: What raw are you using? Your gallery looks greyed out compared to the one out there. The raw is images have a 2133 x 3013 resolution size whereas yours are 1280 x 1808.

Last edited on 29 November 2021, 16:07.

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I appreciate you translating these books, but you could do with a bit of proofreading

There's quite a lot of instances where the dialogue doesn't flow right

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@AriesWarlock
This is one of the instances of "Why should I use a good high res scan for editing when there is an old (now expunged) low quality low res doujinshitenna garbage scan"

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Some suggested corrections for the first 15 pages:

P05
"As long as I stay still", not "As long as I stayed still".
"Chika-chan automatically knows", not "Chika-chan is automatically knows".

P11
"Yoshiko-chan wants to help too", not "Yoshiko chan want to help too".

P13
"I can smell Chika's sweat", not "I can smell Chika sweat".
"It's our turn to take a shower" or "It's our turn to use the shower", not "It's our turn to take the shower".

P14
"Even though I see a sight like this every day" or "Even though I've seen a sight like this every day, not "Even though I seen this sight like every day".
"Why does it make my heart beat so fast", not "Why does it makes my heart beats so fast".

I only corrected the most glaring errors. There's also a lot of dialogue on those pages that need to be rephrased; I recommend you find a proofreader to go over your work next time.

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