Here are some suggested corrections to the first ten pages. Feel free to use them if you plan on updating this gallery.
P03 "I feel like I'm You-chan's special someone", not "I felt like I was You chan special someone" (verb tense changed to match the previous panel). "Every time a love affair happens", not "happen". "My heart feels very relieved", not "feel".
P04 "But that will stay hidden no longer", not "But the hiding ends now".
P06 "You love Chika-chan", not "You loves Chika chan".
P08 "I've got to have her consent" or "I have to get her consent", not "I got to have her consent".
P09 "Chika-chan wants me to do that thing", not "Chika chan want me to do that thing".
P10 "What's with that lost puppy look on your face", not "What's with that lost puppy looks on your face". "Usually, you would just go full speed ahead", not "Usuallly you would just full speed ahead".