When you thought that the lover would become a pervert addicted to sex and do it with anyone while the boyfriend watches from a corner while masturbating crying....

You get that he's become a chad who could fuck his own shadow xD

Cool.

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from quick-shot small dick cucked-victim archetype /s/54f7785a1a/2013759-15
to chad giga cock harem king /s/11048fd41b/2071526-21

who need penis enlargement drug when you can do fivesome

part 1(ENG) /g/2013759/6b2b790a72/

RAW:/g/1808007/a4571aa767/
part 3(RAW):/g/2047773/4d911f8177/

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Looked at the first few pages. How is it "poor grammar"?

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@PsychicDoom:

You didn't look far enough. Check these out:

P04
"Things escalated a little bit", not "Things got a little bit escalated" ("escalated" is a verb, not an adjective).

P10
"Such pretty girls like that" makes no sense. "He's with a couple of pretty girls like them" might be better.

P12
"I've been holding off using the toilet", not "I've been holding to use the toilet".

P14
"I'll be your semen disposal girl", not "I'll be you semen disposal girl".

P16
"Approached me", not "approach me".
"He was acting like scum", not "a scum".
"He keeps bad-mouthing Akiho-kun", not "He keeps bad-mouthing about Akiho-kun".

P18
"Why did Kagami-san request that video", not "Why Kagami-san requested that video".

P19
"When I was shown that video earlier, I felt excited", not "I feel excited" (it should be past tense).

P20
"Why are the popular girls of class here" or "Why are the classes's popular girls here", not "Why is the class popular girls are here".

That's 10 errors in the first 20 pages alone; more than enough to qualify this gallery for the "poor grammar" tag.

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lmao, they trained virgin boy to be a harem chad with built-in berserker mode

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If English isn't your first language, then why translate into it? With all due respect, you couldn't even spell the word 'commissions' correctly on your credits page.

Edit: Aside from the abundant grammar and spelling mistakes, the translation itself isn't exactly the most faithful either. To give one example, in what world does "あったかい" (p32) mean "you came so much"? Why couldn't you just translate that literally?

Last edited on 28 November 2021, 06:29.

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We'll do better, thank you for the feedback...

Edit: Some error has been fixed. Thank you @meow_pao and @akanameTL for the suggestions...

Last edited on 01 December 2021, 01:08.

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or you can fix it up right now

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That's hikari from kazakura gb doujin isnt it?

Base +7, Shade080 +8

Good grief, bunch of translation whiners.

Do you guys do that too when you're having sex with a gyaru?

"No no no, it's supposed to be uh uh uhhhh, not ah ah ahhhh!!! Do it right!"

I almost feel like that answer is going to be yes and "What about it?".

I feel sorry for those girls.

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wheres the old man tachis at?

Base +6

@Larequirem I was surprised by the overly enlarged size XD

I like this overall. :D
Although i cannot say i support well the semen games and the pee scene (golden shower).

The plot with the other guy was hilarious to me because of how it reverses the positions of the rival cliché. And yet it was still predictable. XD
But then i feel sad for him with how insensitively the gyarus mocked him. I wish there was an extra part where he bangs Hikari the latest friend of the gyarus and maybe they could date, to make everyone happy. (us too i hope)

Next chapter there i cum. ;)

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@lovlov You act like all of us here have small penises and are degenerates. I'm a married degenerate. Touch grass lil bitch boy. Grow a larger cock in your next life.

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his girl got turned into a cuck lol

Part 2: /g/2095170/5f6f50f42d/ (better translation)
Part 3: /g/2073066/c411856149/
Part 4: /g/2490465/cba549dc91/

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