Pretty good so far. Nice use of the shoes causing a personality change rather than a full mind control. And a nice touch with Rapunzel's desire for dominance overrides her desire to be submissive to Gothel.
Did like the subtle psychological point made when Rapunzel is shocked by Gothel's return and nearly calling her 'Mother' the first time.
I feel like there are a lot of hentai stories that could be done with Tangled, especially with a dominating woman like Mother Gothel and how she could corrupt Rapunzel and Cassandra. Thanks for the upload.