Translated by popular demand.

Are his faces just blending now? Almost all of these people look like the same character.

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Oh boi gonna grab my popcorn real quick before all the shitstorm.

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>"Translated"
>tagged as "Rewrite"
A'ight, imma head out.

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The text editing hurts my eyes.

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>I translate by using an OCR tool to grab the Japanese text, I put the Japanese text in translators like Google, DeepL, Yandex, etc and I pull Japanese dictionary sites like RomajiDesu and Jisho to help me understand it better. Anyway, there are plenty of worse translators out there, and I'm open to make improvements, anyway. Except the editing, though; I'm not tryna spend hours on GIMP, so I'm sticking with MSPaint. + memes in the edit.

"Translated" lmao

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It's one thing continuing to do machine "translations" and using Microsoft Paint for the bare bones editing after you've been given advice on how to improve, but now you're adding shitty overdone memes (Pg.18) into the mix, too?

Congrats for confirming that you're doing this to piss people off, I suppose.

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Obligatory post for everyone to downvote me.

btw i bet y'all look like the fat guy here in real life lol

Last edited on 20 December 2021, 20:06.

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This isn’t netorare. One dude in a panel thinks she’s hot and she’s clearly doing the fatty. It’s unrequited love.

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It's "BSS netorare".

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No reason for this to be tagged pregnant either.

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She's clearly pregnant in the last page lmao you blind?

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Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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"No reason for this to be tagged pregnant" Dumb motherfucker lmao

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"Remember the presence rule. Should not be tagged if a person is simply shown as pregnant in the last pages of a story, nor is it to be used in place of impregnation"

Dumb motherfucker indeed, that dumb motherfucker being the uploader LMAO

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Sounds like you spend a little too much time on hentai sites.

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@greengrasstree

Sounds like someone's mad they're not getting their dick sucked by everyone when they repeatedly make mediocre "translations" and refuse to improve. Grow up.

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>Sounds like you spend a little too much time on hentai sites

do you not hear yourself, LMAO

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Bunch of fat NEETS getting insecure. Dumb monkeys belong in a zoo lmao

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welp. time to add this nigga to the exclusions list.

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Doesn't あとのまつり mean “Later at the festival”?

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What a clown.

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Mods please ban the uploader. They're underage

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Unfortunately for all of us, the e-h mod team are too busy huffing their own shit to ban uploaders who need a ban, or to give us tags for MTL.

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@sacheu: No, it means "too late". "後の祭り" means the (day) after of the festival, it is an expression that you have arrived too late and missed all the fun.

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Rip, missed the shitstorm before his comments hit -100 because rewrite is a hidden tag for me.

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Incorrect tags, poor grammar, machine translated, no will to improve, keep it up!

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@Arlaato Minato, that's cool, you're right I even checked here. I find it confusing though, if it was 祭りの後 then I would've understood as something after the festival, but I still have much to learn.

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You know something is wrong with the translation when the first comment is "Translated by popular demand" and it has rewrite on the tags.

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I'd rather fap to this than untranslated Japanese, and I just did. People whining about how the uploader needs to be banned need to move on with their lives.

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As always, don't wait too long to express your feelings or it will be too late.

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People doing so-so/mediocre rewrites with overused/shitty memes and shitty tagging. Never change e.

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A selection of 11 lines where the translation can be improved (Japanese raw for comparison: /s/9369c58c5c/1259436-79):

Page 3 Panel 1
This translation: “Was she at the festival?”
Japanese text: 川瀬まつり
Author’s intent (basic translation): Matsuri Kawase {this is just a name}

Page 4 Panel 5
This translation: “Did you go?”
Japanese text: どったの？
Author’s intent (basic translation): “What’s up?”

Page 5 Panel 1
This translation: “I’m looking at your collar…”
Japanese text: コラ ドコ覗いてんだよ
Author’s intent (basic translation): “Hey, where do you think you’re staring at?” {she’s accusing him of looking at her weird}

Page 5 Panel 2
This translation: “Who could it be?”
Japanese text: 処女喪失！？
Author’s intent (basic translation): “She lost her virginity!?”

Page 13 Panel 2
This translation: “Your pussy was cute in the summer too.”
Japanese text: まつりのマ〇コもかわいいよ
Author’s intent (basic translation): “Your pussy is cute too, Matsuri.”

Page 13 Panel 2
This translation: “Your pussy tightened after I said that. / It’s so good that it’s sucking me in.”
Japanese text: オレのちんぽギューギュー締め付けて / 美味しそうにしゃぶってる
Author’s intent (basic translation): “It’s squeezing down on my dick so tightly / and sucking on it like it’s delicious.”

Page 18 Panel 4
This translation: “So, I’ll happily…”
Japanese text: 幸せです
Author’s intent (basic translation): “I’m so happy.” {This is a finished utterance. She is describing how she feels now, not what she is willing to do}

Page 18 Panel 4
This translation: “become pregnant with your baby even though I am your cousin {Jojo meme}”
Japanese text: ヒロの赤ちゃんワタシのおなかにほしい
Author’s intent (basic translation): I want Hiro’s baby in my belly!” {She is expressing a desire; there is no mention of their familial relationship; the Jojo meme was not in the original}

Page 19 Panel 5
This translation: “You’ve done it.”
Japanese text: もっと…仕込んで…
Author’s intent (basic translation): “Train me…more…” or “Teach me…more…”

Page 19 Panel 5
This translation: “You’ve made me more into your woman.”
Japanese text: 女にして
Author’s intent (basic translation): “Make me into a woman” {she is making a demand of him}

Page 20 Panel 4
This translation: “This cosplay is too lewd. You’re so bad.”
Japanese text: コスプレとかホントおまえスケベだよなぁ！
Author’s intent (basic translation): “Cosplay…You really are one hell of a pervert!” {she is calling him the pervert, not the cosplay}

Last edited on 19 January 2022, 20:56.

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