I know there are some typesetting, spelling, and QC issues. I am not the translator - The author has a Patreon of their official english translations, which is where I got this. Just wanted to thank you guys for almost a decade of epic faps.
@burittowarrior Damn, I was questioning whether this was a rewrite rather than a translation until I saw the comment. I'm guessing the translation adding the "step-" part (which is not present in the original Japanese version) is because of Patreon, but I don't think their ToS says anything against good typesetting.
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