Imagine if the dude finished nutting one out then it turns out the piece of clothes belongs to one of his male friends. Smelling nice is not something that is exclusive to females. For fuck, I use shitload of detergent when I wash my clothes and I even hand wash some of the more delicate pieces.
Maybe I'm actually girl.

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Nah, he knew it was girl's because he already smelled his male friends' ones

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I'm not going to nitpick every single issue with the translation, but the most obvious one is probably the first line of pg56.
二日酔い means hangover. Not sure what happened, since even a machine translation should get that part right.
So if we were to redo that line completely, it should look something like, "Ugh, I'm completely hungover... No, that's not the problem!"

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@Ass Spanker: yes, you're now my waifu. I hope you're happy now.

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Page 79...reference to a certain owl, eh?

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