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TL note: The "Sensei" in the title is not written as 先生 (teacher) but 先制 (initiative) instead. Nothing says proactivity like throwing a tantrum when you are denied sex.

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I was laughing too hard through the first half to fap to this.
10/10. I want to see more of these two.

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Finally some good fucking food.

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wholesome sweet gyaru

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tomboy gyaru, a unique combination.

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>tan tomboy gyaru
YEAH!
>condom
Well, nothing's perfect.

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tomboy gyaru, the combination we never knew we needed. I support tomboy gyaru supremacy.

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THE COMBINATION I DIDNT KNOW I NEED 😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩

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Too cute, couldn’t jack off. Also Tomboy+Gyaru is a miracle combination there should be more of.

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after so many ntr i have watched. i need to come back to this cute tomboy gyaru to clean my soul

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This is peak content, imagine if she had freckles *chef's kiss*

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Ngl guys but the "tomboy" looks so much like a boy that my boner is confused

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EDIT: As I'm doing a re-translation now instead of typing this after a 5-min comparison, I re-edited the below to change the tone of criticism and actually remove a point I felt was borderline nitpicky and also wrong (thanks, Muphry's law). The rest is still valid, but yeah. Felt like I should mellow this out.

I probably wouldn't have even bothered doing this if this wasn't gyaru, but alas. Also, you're asking for money, which massively increases the standards.

p.1 Ah. Today's Saturday. Go for it~ => You're making it sound like the other gyaru's just stating a fact, when the implication here is that they know that every Sat, her friend goes to Sensei's house. "Oh yeeeah. Today's Saturday, huh? Go for it/Go get it/Go get him~"
p.4 i didn't even knew => know
p.4 Come on => Actually, it's "here". ほら without context is almost always translated as "c'mon", but he's clearly handing over a drink.
p.4 We ended up together, didn't we~? Dunno => You misinterpreted that line. She's not saying it as a matter of fact, but teasing him with the previous line. "Ya say that... But ya like me. That pretty much means that we're datin', nah~? Whatever." 知らん doesn't mean "know" here either.
p.5 an uniform => a uniform
p.5 I have a boyfriend and haven't even kissed him yet => You make it sound like she has a boyfriend OUTSIDE of Sensei. She's referring to Sensei here. This actually kinda messes up the following line.
p.5 You still don't get it, do you? => "I've told you over and over again, and you still don't get it." Half the sentence is omitted.
p.5 Do lewd things => イチャイチャ doesn't really mean lewd things, it means being flirty/kissy. We all know she wants to fuck eventually (and even says so later), but you're making it sound like she isn't an innocent maiden, which she is. The whole idea is to kinda subvert expectation: she's a gyaru, so the reader almost expects her to be slutty. Then she says「あたしだって先生とヤリタイ！！」=> "I wanna do "it" with Sensei!!" First instinct is to think she's gonna say fuck, or "lewd things" as you put it, afterwards, but nope! She says a cutesy innocent thing like making out! You completely missed this and the fact that this ties into the previous line about her "never even having kissed her boyfriend (Sensei)".
p.6 You got the speakers wrong. Granted, it's pretty unclear, but the speech mannerisms give it away. "Ugh, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to [What I just said was by mistake...] => That's Sensei speaking. Also, you got つい wrong. "That was... The worst thing you could ever say [to me]" That's the gyaru speaking. This part doesn't really bother me as much, because honestly, it COULD work either way varying with bubble punctuation. EDIT: Way too nitpicky, and sensei being the narrator for the entire thing makes sense after reading this over beyond a 10-second glance.
p.12 Some of that exchange is wrong. => "Okay! That's enough for to- // Who'd you kiss... like that [before me]...? What are you... // No way I'd do that/you're completely off the mark [that's just not true]!. // I'm just trying to help here... // I know, buuuut... This is just so unfaaair [frustrating]!" The point is that he's good at kissing. She's not. She's frustrated that he's good at it, "jokingly" questions if he's been practicing with someone else, but then caves in with her cutesy tantrum when she realizes he's just trying his best for her.
p.12 If you think we shouldn't... => 悪いと思ってるなら here translates to: "If you feel sorry/bad, then..." And now we continue with the next line: "Could you at least look at my cute bra [for me]...?"
p.22 Tell me if it hurts. Yes. => She says "OKAY". "Tell me if it hurts. Okay."

On the plus side, your editing work isn't too shabby.

Last edited on 23 March 2022, 07:00.

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I really like the 'tomboy' genre, but that's too much. That is just a dude with a pussy.

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Never thought a hentai character could be TOO tomboyish for me. I mean, she looks exactly like a dude with boobs and no penis. That face is a boy's face

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Everyone who dislikes this manga should make sure to do a PCR test sometime soon because it seems you've lost all taste

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Spunky vanilla tomboy gyaru, what a haymaker to my strike-zone... Great story and I love the artist's style. Her faces on Page 6 and 13 had me dying. Love the glare while holding the 'YES' pillow. Way too cute.

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Why the Kpop boygroup band haircut though?

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"This tomboy looks too much like a guy!"

Y'all fuckin heretics don't deserve quality tomboys smh

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Look, it's not NTR, or some weird fucking rape shit, or aliens/monsters/animals, or fuck knows what else.

Its just pure vanilla tomboy, the best sort. So I'll take it, and dozen more - though i doubt a dozen more pure vanilla tomboys exists...

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@ Twin182 off yourself

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