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[Werk (Andou Shuki)] Oshigoto Theater 9 (The IDOLM@STER MILLION LIVE!) [English] [Digital]

[Werk (安藤周記)] オシゴトシアター9 (アイドルマスターミリオンライブ!) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2022-01-06 14:06
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Language:English  TR
File Size:26.13 MiB
Length:23 pages
Favorited:1045 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.51

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Posted on 06 January 2022, 14:12 by:   Noni    PM
Score +70
Posted on 06 January 2022, 14:24 by:   hero8397    PM
Score +18
so that was human's meat and the wine was human's blood
Posted on 06 January 2022, 14:35 by:   kinoshita_tokichiro    PM
Score +30
So hard to find decent hair nowadays.
Posted on 06 January 2022, 23:47 by:   dfgghgf    PM
Score +140
First, what the fuck is the font that was used? Maybe its acceptable for a few text bubbles but using it for an entire book is just...

Second, if you're going to translate SFX don't just slap english text over existing stuff where it's convenient without even cleaning the JP out first, and then ignore most of the other SFX.

Third, if you're going to 'translate' at least get someone that can write english at an acceptable level to proofread for you - this is riddled with obvious mistakes and its a shame to see Andou Shuki's work treated like this

Just a few suggestions to justify the poor grammar tag:
p3: "Not only did you invite a hunter like me into your house, ..."
"It's the first time I have tried this kind of meat"
"It is meat that a friend..."
コンコン (not even translated) -> Knock Knock
"Then why is the whole village worried?"

p5: Inhalated isn't actually an english word, that should be "Inhaled"
"By the way, you should spend the night here"

p9: "Can we swap"
Also Matsuri's なのです speech tic isn't exactly an exclamation of pleasure

p11: "Matsuri-chan"
"Isn't this a little too big"

p13: "So why don't you have fun with us all night"

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