I wanted to try translating something because I am learning Japanese, this translation is done 100% without machine translation.

RAW: /g/2110245/b824652f5a/

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Thanks for translating this. Unfortunately you fell for the newbie trap and used the 1280x resolution resample pages for editing instead of the original raw which is around ~4299 x 6071. For gallery viewing, e-hentai downsamples all images to 1280x resolution so if you downloaded the pages without using the original source link, you got the reduced version instead.

Another possibility is that you downloaded the raw from one of the aggregator sites such as NH. These sites only copy galleries from e-hentai at resample quality and thus don't have the original resolution versions available. You shouldn't use these sites as a source for your raws.

Always check that you're using the original raw before you start editing. If you ever see the resolution being 1280x something, then most of the time that means something is wrong and you got the wrong version.

Here's some ways you can download the original full resolution version of any gallery on e-hentai:
1) Torrent download if a torrent is available. Avoid any torrents labeled 1280x though.
2) Click on Archive download and then Download Original Archive.
3) If you prefer to download one page at a time, make sure you download using the Download Original Source link located below each opened image in the gallery.

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Hey, not bad for a first try. I'm adding a bunch of guides and tips to help you out.

1. You might want to practice your typesetting. Center-align your text, and center it inside the bubble. Guide below.
2. Please redraw. When you remove floating text, for example, you need to redraw the background, else it leaves very noticeable white blotches. It takes time and practice. Guide below.
3. Punctuate. You HAVE to punctuate in English, even for comics and manga. I know JP never punctuate minus the odd ellipses or question mark. This doesn't apply to English. Put periods at the end of your sentences, and commas where they need to be.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glfdOwM3TFE

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If you want to try translating avoid newer works (anything older than a year is free game). Any translation regardless of how bad massively reduces the chances of it ever getting a proper translation.

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Page 22 left most bubble, again is misspelled as agaiin.

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除了蕾丝边差点让人密恐，别的都不错

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