ツツツ Still pretty new to this kinda stuff. If there are any sort of criticisms (stylistic choices, font, translation, etc), I'll take them into consideration.

Guides below. This isn't bad at all for a first (or 2nd?) attempt.

1. Please export black and white images as grayscale PNG-8, not RGB JPGs. This is to a) avoid artifacting; b) preserve quality; c) de-bloat. Your images are currently in RGB, which also messes with color accuracy and leveling.
2. Level your pages. It looks fine here, but there's still light leveling necessary. Cleaning guide covers this.
3. Watch out for text positioning. Your text is often off-center: too high, too low, or too close to one border or another.
4. Please check the rename petition for how to properly name your galleries.
5. Make sure to reposition the hearts to match EN text. You often leave them in their original JP positions, and it looks very disjointed.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

Last edited on 23 January 2022, 23:27.

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Thanks for the resources and advice! I'll give them a read.

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RAW: /s/44cee4664b/1241530-38

Looks good to me, except for the minor issues already pointed out.

pg. 2: If this "is" how

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"It feels like I'm the protagonist of an erotic manga!"
Dude be like 4th wall breaking

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>She ate his ass
>now he walks forever in limbo, trying to replicate that high

We lost another one, boys

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She's a genuine virgin killer.

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