I can't put it nicely, so I'll just say that your editing is in dire needs of improvement. Please read and watch all of this before you continue pumping these translations out:

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glfdOwM3TFE

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>American
>dark skin
>all speak Ebonics

Seems accurate to me.

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How can I delete my eyes?

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@ cutegyaru
Just want to point out five out of six links on your post is dead.

I think we missing 2 more chapters to be translated from tankoubon that this chapter came from /g/1361860/f190602b7f/
on side note this might be improvement compared to your last translation /g/1623002/d7f36e46cd/ if possible please redo [Aino Chie] Senaka no Kako chapter its hard to read.

Last edited on 17 January 2022, 01:34.

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@andrenix
Wayback Machine kinda sucks since it's an archive, but the links work. Just gotta... wait or try again lol

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Didn't think you'd actually put red in a black&white story till I saw it.

What's wrong with a star symbol next to English lines or similar?

Also, all those tats in 2 weeks doesn't make sense unless they didn't care about the quality.

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Wtf is that orange mark?

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butthole too far from pussy
my immersion is ruined

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@maaaks Redo the other translation by this author you did (now you've improved)
/g/1623002/d7f36e46cd/

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The NTR feels like very much an afterthought here as both the husband and the son are so disconnected from the story they might as well exist in some parallel universe where nobody gives a shit .

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notice that no one is kissing her, coz if one of them kiss her, he is automatically gay because he know that mouth of her suck a bunch of dicks and he is okay with it

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RAW: /s/27d785590f/1361860-120

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Page 23, first panel: no tattoos on her back and ass.
Page 24: large tattoos on her back and ass.
Hentai world logic.

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