Oh gee, oh my, why on Earth would she do that? I can't POSSIBLY imagine the reason why. Guess we'll have to wait for [me to translate] part two!

Hitman 3 on Steam tomorrow, hype! Only had to wait a year to avoid spending money in the Epic Games Store!

Damn dude, if there's ever a way to make your audience despise the Main Character, page 6 is it. What an asshole

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I would have easily accepted a fucking fist to his face after page 6, could fap to that

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re: above comments i made this relevant meme while working on this and talking to friends but didn't put it in the gallery for obv reasons lmao
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/334089462218883074/931498644367110205/unknown.png

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the artist probably made him dumb on purpose, I guess because he wants to follow either the cliche "MC thinks the interested person turned out promiscuous, which is untrue and they are still waiting for him" or "MC is shy but not really a good person, and the interested person will bring the best out of them" which is more rare to occur.

Either way, good art and nice translation although I found the used words amusing.

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I'll weigh in on the bolded words experimentation. Too much over-emphasis. When every other phrase is bolded, the emphasis loses its impact. If you want to get an idea of what I mean, I'll re-type these thoughts randomly making half the phrases all-caps to properly simulate the feeling of someone randomly shouting every 3 seconds mid-sentence.

I'll WEIGH IN on the BOLDED words EXPERIMENTATION. TOO MUCH over-EMPHASIS. WHEN every OTHER PHRASE is BOLDED, the emphasis LOSES its IMPACT. If you WANT TO get an idea OF what I MEAN, I'll RE-TYPE these thoughts RANDOMLY making half the PHRASES ALL-CAPS to PROPERLY simulate THE feeling of someone randomly SHOUTING every 3 SECONDS MID-sentence.

The bolding isn't inherently a bad idea, but you should be a bit more selective about what words or phrases you want to put some oomph behind.

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BOLD OVERDOSE CURED

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I don't know why everyone's getting so pissed off about page 6. The MC's a lot like us but the difference here is he's said the quite thing we all think when faced by someone we are intimidated by out loud. I get it she's a cute tomboy but it's clear at some point when they were growing up their relationship soured thanks to his lack of height growth plus shyness getting mixed with her borderline bully/yandere attitude as he started to shut himself off only made it worse.

Hell even the story chapters end here where you'd think he'd be happier just shows him being hesitant and conflicted.
I honestly can't blame him really.

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@kyotogrand
Fun TL. I agree with the comment on bolding. It's a powerful tool... to be used sparingly :^)

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@cutegyaru
What can I say, I went power mad! Check the original gallery for a fun ride lmao

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So this is rape with vanilla

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Sequel raw: /s/5f38f5ed3f/2067853-118

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>pg.6

What the fuck did she do to make him go off like that? Christ, dude, feel her out before you hit the nitrous.

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At this point, I expect the other girl (whom he called angel) to be an absolutely horrible person, lol.

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All this whiteknighting. Apparently you're supposed to know people's intentions when they're talking down on you after not having interacted with them in a long time (or anyone for that matter) and your reaction should be positive (???).
Did you think "A Hedgehog's Dilemma" only referred to the male character?
Just read the sequel or wait until it's translated lmao.

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My only question now is, do you plan to do part 2?

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This jackass deserves to be NTR'd painfully.

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Art isn't that great, guy is drawn half faceless, half crappily.

Story is a big meh, heap of crappy clichés and the guy is a total autistic spergfire.

@Imsolo: never speak for "us". the guy may be like *you*, but that's on you. most people aren't weird ass rainman caricatures.

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Why do these Japanese school kids talk like retarded American zoomers?

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@DFCcakelove
Because they are retarded too.

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oh wow another work ruined by this "translation". localizers really ruin everything

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@DFCcakelove Them talking like retarded american zoomers is one thing, it seems like they don't even follow the original dialogue.

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