My 2nd japanese to english translation, feel free to point any mistake or express any remark.

Raw : /s/f215cf71a1/732657-135

I'm open to recommandations if you have any, I'm no professional but hope to keep on translating from time to time :)

- Spends entire life training for revenge
- Does not have any countermeasures when a Frog Demon goes underwater

Never change, hentai logic.

Base +8, disposable.respect +6, fatjoe400 +6, Beane +7, darklord1235 +9, AhKai +5, Harakadakara +6, LightSolas +6, keketin +6, Anedepami +6, Wiser Guy +15, Don Pencil +6, PinguPrin +7, and 19 more...

@dideroy - if you are open to suggestion, may i suggest anything by Mimizu?
specifically any of their virtual nyotaika program 3,4,5 or 6?
i tried to do as such once using a screen capture OCR and DeepL but got, admittedly nowhere. probably as i had no idea what i was doing.

Last edited on 21 January 2022, 03:45.

Base +8, Dideroy +6

I worry about that line on page 10 about rushing. I can't check, but it feels like a missed negation.

Base +6, Dideroy +6

This is the most by-the-book rape doujin I've read in years.

Base +14, Dideroy +6, Spooky Ghost Butts +8

It's not a bad translation for a second effort. The main thing I'd recommend is getting a native English speaker to proofread your work before you publish it (if you don't already). There are a few places with small errors or where the text doesn't flow naturally. But really, this is very good compared to some of the stuff on this site (I love you, translators)

Base +7, Dideroy +6, Spooky Ghost Butts +8