Can't believe this doujin went so long without a translation...and I can't believe I finished translating it in one day. This was my first time doing a full color doujin and I was always skeptical about doing one but I couldn't pass this one up. It looks like it came out well so I am glad.

RAW: /g/1502243/200e09b0eb/

Shamelessly copied comment from klermun:

Thanks for translating this. Unfortunately you fell for the newbie trap and used the 1280x resolution resample pages for editing instead of the original raw which is around ~4244 x 6094. For gallery viewing, e-hentai downsamples all images to 1280x resolution so if you downloaded the pages without using the original source link, you got the reduced version instead.

Another possibility is that you downloaded the raw from one of the aggregator sites such as NH. These sites only copy galleries from e-hentai at resample quality and thus don't have the original resolution versions available. You shouldn't use these sites as a source for your raws.

Always check that you're using the original raw before you start editing. If you ever see the resolution being 1280x something, then most of the time that means something is wrong and you got the wrong version.

Here's some ways you can download the original full resolution version of any gallery on e-hentai:
1) Torrent download if a torrent is available. Avoid any torrents labeled 1280x though.
2) Click on Archive download and then Download Original Archive.
3) If you prefer to download one page at a time, make sure you download using the Download Original Source link located below each opened image in the gallery.

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1. Punctuate. You HAVE to punctuate in English, even for comics and manga. I know JP never punctuate minus the odd ellipses or question mark. This doesn't apply to English. Put periods at the end of your sentences, and commas where they need to be.

Resources for you, including a very thorough guide on redrawing.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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Irodori comics go fuck yourself

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If you're feeling up to it, the new one by this author looks pretty damn good as well.

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Page 20: Man was PRESSED! LOL

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>sole male
incorrect tag.
there was another male fucking the girl in one page, please change it.

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