It was worth it just for the ending! God dammit, it's Masterpiece!
On other note: art and scenes are good, story written pretty well.
Great job! Thank you!

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That's a whole lot of set-up before the sex. Wish she ended up as a slut in denial by the end, would have made a nice payoff.

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>98 pages doujinshi
>half of it about the isekai setting and character introduction

"that time when my isekai manga manuscript get rejected and I make a dojinshi from it because I don't want to give up"

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Base +35, shuntensatsu +15, alkopone +6, DOIHI3 +6, kuromelover +6, GearZeroSky +20, Darknessend +6, darkfjo +7, enterthepanda +7, jindoko90 +6, daicalun07 +6, crazyjapan +10, garsi6 +6, and 94 more...

Absolutely based

Base +6, Zakuzelo +14, Darknessend +6, AhKai +5, shuntensatsu +15, hakuryu2250 +10, MagB +6, Elevens +15, HodorHodor +8

https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ363168.html
https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_218855

Base +17, Darknessend +6, quanghuy11299 -6, DaveW +9, Elevens +15

Excellent art! The whole isekai backstory was pretty amusing too. It's clear the author really wanted to make their own fantasy setting haha. The premise and execution of this story itself is pretty generic, but the top tier art easily carried it. I'm hoping we'll get more interesting scenarios with the various other Valkyries.

Base +6, Zakuzelo +14, shuntensatsu +15, Origa_Lilia +6, your_name +6, ErwynnWarsun +3, hakuryu2250 +10, RyuuHawke +6, Gandu89 +11, Gentleman Chimera +8, demon767 +4, Elevens +15, alllifeinfate +6

a guild with lot of ponytail chic?

LET ME IN, LET ME INNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

thanks for the translation

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Art is sooo good

Base +6, ErwynnWarsun +3, Elevens +15

I love these doujinshi where there's time spent on fleshing out the characters and setting. Goes a long way to making them feel like actual people. Furohile Jou is another one that does a great job at this

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In the eternal words of Tom the Cat:"Gee I'm losing one Million Dollars... BUT I'M HAPPY!!!" and these rapists got it FromSoftware's Moonlight Sword! Yup worth it!

Base +6, Darknessend +6

tbh most isekai with porn seems bland so how about some porn with isekai

Base +6, hakuryu2250 +10, DaveW +9, Darknessend +6, ag13 +6

Please make this into a series Mashu. Your art is so fucking good.

Base +6, hakuryu2250 -14, margarinebrine +6, Darknessend +6, Bobbyasdf -8, Elevens +15, tobeunforgiven2 +27

Love how page 59 ended up being rather prophetic, lol.

Base +6, hakuryu2250 +10, Mao M. +6, Runnerdown +7, Darknessend +6, Gentleman Chimera +8

now thats what a proper strong-minded woman looks like, even after all that she didn't break and stayed true to her words. Not that "strong-minded girl" in the title but is actually far from being strong-minded.

Base +7, ErwynnWarsun +3, Zakuzelo +14, hakuryu2250 +10, noob30000 +6, xyisobaka +6, Darknessend +6, disposable.respect +6, shuntensatsu +16, warellis +7

waiting for the ninja girl turn

Base +6, hakuryu2250 +14

When you grew tired of drawing girls in lingerie then straight up and draw a BANGER of a Doujin.

Base +6, hakuryu2250 +10, The Golden Mask +3, Runnerdown +7, Elevens +15

- 1 billion funds
Amazing

Base +7, hakuryu2250 +10, Gentleman Chimera +8

I need to see them all raped. I'll be big bucks for it.

Base +6, InugamiMochi +6, testuo01 +11, pihip -6

It's an injustice if we don't get the other girls. Also, it's hilarious that the strongest guild is in so much debt.

Base +7, hakuryu2250 +10, Runnerdown +7

This doujin need a sequel and an anime adaptation.

Base +9, hakuryu2250 +14, avrelivs +6, Elevens +15

No official English version yet?
I'll buy this when Fakku releases it even if its overpriced.

Base +5, QLord85 +6, tealsack -9, Garaliru -6, Warol_Koytylla -6, Teh_Red_Guy -12, aramil31 -6, tobeunforgiven2 -27, Return_by_Climax -6, xLucia~ -7, Cerberusguardian -6

What kinda idiot would let her go afterward? smh dude

Base +6, Soulent +5, hakuryu2250 +14, A1D3M +6, Elevens +15, xLucia~ +7, Cerberusguardian +6

I want a doujin with the muscle girl!

Base +6, KaroshiKT +5, goonygoon +6, Elevens +15, tobeunforgiven2 +27

The taste of your pussy is high-class he says... As he licks and sucks on the pussy right after his friend has creampied it.

Base +7, hakuryu2250 +14, JumpingJellybeans +6, aukxn +21, aramil31 +6, goonygoon +6, Heinz_Brausewind +6, Elevens +15, xLucia~ +7, Cerberusguardian +6

Somehow I didn't notice these OCs were for porn till now. And it's good porn! Like a cross between Crimson and Kizuki Aruchu. Really scratches my old itch for those two.

Base +17, disposable.respect +6

quite similar to monhan erohon 12. hope that there will be a decensored version.

Base +7, Hansuke +7

It's funny when you see people coming to this story asking for more rape, mindbreak, possibly an ntr and other miseries instead of enjoying some high-octane action with badass chicks with sexy scenes. That ending was perfect. The rapists got slaughtered.

Last edited on 27 October 2024, 18:26.

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