The author rushed too much of the beginning setup. Not only that, but the shots are too far off in a lot of them so it's impossible to convey emotion. It's like this person just posed them like Barbie and Ken dolls rather than try to use the power of 3D to tell a story in a more cinematic way. I would suggest that whoever did this take the time to look at their favorite hentai/porn grapic novel and try to emulate the way they frame their shots. Also --you should take the time to learn how to use the build in expressions with the DAZ figures because they all have blank looks on their face.

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