Lol it's painful, but I think the original artist is not American, might be the original script?

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I honestly don't see anything wrong with this translation or "way of writing".
There are some unfortunate choices of words that make it a bit hard to read (I learned that its best to avoid contractions in certain situations, since it can make sentences harder to read sometimes) but thats about it.

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Your art is very nice but I hope you consider getting someone to help you with the English

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This stuff is gold, finally something new in his way
For the people complaining about the TL: there's way worse translated stuff out there, english is not my main language but i still managed to understand the whole chapter, this was definetly not translated with google translator, pretty sure the guy who did it put some effort in it
Keep the good stuff coming bro!

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I can read and understand the English used here, no problem!

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I don't know what ya'll are bitchin' about. This is better writing than most of the shit in Jump, and it comes with free busty black lady getting dicked down.

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Wow good art and in interesting story, I'm actually curious for more. What a messed up world tho.

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I will be looking forward to this series with great zeal, just imagine the goddess harem this guy can have

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The cover page literally says he drew and wrote this, guys.

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Fun book. Great art. Good world building. This could have the potential to be a ongoing series. Remember feeling the same way reading the first chapter of "World End Harem".

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I like the story, very interesting thus far.

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Honestly, the English might not be perfect, but it's readable and I'm never confused by what's happening or meant to be conveyed. That's better than a depressingly high amount of paid translators for this stuff so I'm satisfied.

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