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https://ec.toranoana.jp/tora_r/ec/item/040030690638/

https://www.doujinshi.org//book/1637759

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Base +41, Chinro +6, NeverMoreKK +6, tm1145141919810 +2

Yeah, I'm thinking this needs a TAXED edit.

Base +6, Chinro -6, Dyjin -27, WolfbladeW +6, MSTallgeese -10, thecronosone -7, LemonKick -6, Gespens -8, PAMRZ -12, kentrell leonard69 -6, viggy22 -5

Thanks for translating, but here are some typos I noticed:

1̶6̶,̶ ̶"̶p̶u̶s̶y̶"̶ ̶i̶n̶s̶t̶e̶a̶d̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶"̶p̶u̶s̶s̶y̶"̶ ̶-̶ ̶b̶o̶t̶t̶o̶m̶ ̶l̶e̶f̶t̶ ̶b̶u̶b̶b̶l̶e̶.̶
̶1̶7̶,̶ ̶"̶g̶e̶t̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶p̶u̶s̶s̶y̶ ̶w̶o̶r̶k̶i̶n̶g̶!̶"̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶b̶e̶ ̶e̶i̶t̶h̶e̶r̶ ̶"̶g̶e̶t̶ ̶y̶o̶ ̶p̶u̶s̶s̶y̶"̶ ̶o̶r̶ ̶"̶g̶e̶t̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶r̶ ̶p̶u̶s̶s̶y̶"̶ ̶-̶ ̶m̶i̶d̶d̶l̶e̶ ̶l̶e̶f̶t̶ ̶b̶u̶b̶b̶l̶e̶
̶1̶8̶,̶ ̶"̶s̶p̶e̶c̶i̶a̶l̶ ̶s̶l̶e̶n̶d̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶s̶e̶m̶e̶n̶"̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶b̶e̶ ̶"̶s̶p̶e̶c̶i̶a̶l̶ ̶b̶l̶e̶n̶d̶"̶ ̶-̶ ̶t̶o̶p̶ ̶l̶e̶f̶t̶ ̶b̶u̶b̶b̶l̶e̶

Edit: Thanks for updating, hope to see a final version soon ^_^

Last edited on 26 February 2022, 08:05.

Base +6, Viora_Omega +6, alkanos1234 +7

Thanks @Monochromer for the notice

Base +2

@ MsSmallPeePee
There's more. Recommend you give the entire thing a 2nd read. You seem willing to update, so I'll spare you the "rough grammar" tag for now.

Ex:
p.5 spewingout (missing space)
p.6 thiick
p.7 you small dick => your

Etc., etc.

Base +15, Viora_Omega +6, Chinro +6, Henlor +8, Shurikensei +10