This is my first attempt at translating something like this, there are sure to be errors so feel free to point them out.
I plan to do the follow-up chapter to this as well (and maybe one other chapter from this tank), so stay tuned for that if you liked this one.
Bit surprised so little of this artist's stuff has been translated to english.

Raw: /s/3aed871c1b/1424267-65

Translation/cleaning/typesetting: me

I am an idiot and forgot to switch the language to English, sorry about that...

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>This is my first attempt at translating something like this, there are sure to be errors so feel free to point them out.
I only took a look at a few pages, but everything seems very well done, both translation and editing wise (minus some redrawing hiccups, but that's completely understandable).

I'm linking some extra resources for the hell of it, but you seem to have already done your homework.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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>I only took a look at a few pages, but everything seems very well done, both translation and editing wise (minus some redrawing hiccups, but that's completely understandable).
Appreciate the feedback.
And yeah, redrawing is definitely my weak point...

>I'm linking some extra resources for the hell of it, but you seem to have already done your homework.
Thanks, I'll have to check those out.

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Needs a sequel where she is awake and they confirm their feelings

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