On page 4, not sure if Bremerton is moaning "pew pew" or if it's a sound effect.

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Chinese:
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Korean:
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Yes, yes id like a sweaty Brem.

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>On page 4, not sure if Bremerton is moaning "pew pew" or if it's a sound effect.
Very obvious it's SFX for "spurt".

Misc comment: you often clean out text, but then omit to redraw, leaving weird, ugly white blotches (this especially happen when you clean SFX/moans that overlap with bubbles). I linked a guide below to help you out.

Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials

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hotate-chan never fails to activate my neurons

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She is saying it to encourage him to cum. The bubbles have exactly the same shape and they even are connected. It makes sense within the dialogue.

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