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Cobbled-Together 02 by monocone (tagged)

Western
Posted:2022-03-10 07:16
Parent:2121618
Visible:Yes
Language:Japanese  
File Size:39.97 MiB
Length:38 pages
Favorited:99 times
Rating:
99
Average: 1.70

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Posted on 25 July 2021, 13:22 by:   Medan74    PM
Score +78
It’s not even that art was repurposed, but instead of having a credits page at the end, the credits pollute every page to the point where it is impossible to focus on anything else
Posted on 25 July 2021, 14:38 by:   P-dog    PM
Score +60
Even without the credits issue, the "story text block" is in different places and is hard to read. It might ruin the visual somewhat, but considering all the other "text credits" that's clearly not the main issue. I haven't read the first one so I mostly skimmed the story instead of trying to really understand whatever is going on, but the text on page 5 and 7 in particular is just difficult to read since it's the same color text as the floor.

With the whole "art from a bunch of different artists" thing, all of their individual parts being credited each page, a plot about multi-verse/clones or whatever, a lot of characters and kinks at the same time, AND actual characters from established shows, there's just so much going on.

I think the only way this gallery could really work is to have the non-tagged version (uploader's previous "Cobbled together" has a non-tagged version) and the tagged version in the same gallery, and maybe mess with the text boxes. I'm not going to kinkshame or anything, if you clicked on a gallery with a thumbnail of naked Marge Simpsons in test tubes then you likely don't get moral highground, but in terms of story then the text needs to be legible and in terms of giving credit AND making a good experience then it'd probably be better to have the non-tagged gallery in the first half and then for all the people who want to know just where all the specific art is from to look up that artist they can continue reading and see this tagged version as an actual credits/"behind the scenes" type thing.

*also just as a real thing that throws me off when looking at either gallery: when I look at the crowd and randomly see someone tagged as 'Seth MacFarlane' and now I'm wondering "What is he doing here?"
Posted on 31 July 2021, 01:28 by:   Collector1    PM
Score +7
They post on Paheal too, and they tagged everyone because people asked them to tag their submissions. Instead of doing it with actual tags, they just wrote the tags on their pictures.
Posted on 10 December 2021, 16:52 by:   kain1987    PM
Score +6
WHY are thier names all over the pictures? and pointing a random shit?
Posted on 10 December 2021, 17:18 by:   MagicalJuko    PM
Score +52
The sheer amount effort it must take for snipping from other works and shitting them into these abominations. It makes the mind wonder what could possibly be the point of it all. Seriously the morbid curiosity is itching.
Posted on 10 December 2021, 18:14 by:   tonyxxx    PM
Score +39
I almost wish you weren't so honest about where the art comes from, because those tags everywhere are distracting as fuck and kinda defeats the purpose, maybe rather than spending this much time crediting artists use that time instead to trace over it and make it transformative enough so you don't have to.
Posted on 10 March 2022, 11:34 by:   DIEDIEDIE765    PM
Score +6
Even without the tags I don't see it being very good.

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