thanks for translating!

Base +6, Hansuke +7

Raw: /g/1746489/7f33285a47/

https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ299380.html
https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_187502/

Base +17

Obligatory thanks for the translation but unfortunately you used e-hentai's downsampled 1280px horizontal res images instead of the original sized images for editing comment.

You can download the full resolution images via one of the following methods:
0. Stay away from aggregator sites like nh because they mostly just copy the 1280px res images from this site and don't bother to download the original size versions.
1. Torrent download (if available; WARNING torrents not always contain the latest or the fulll resolution version of a gallery. Torrents for downscaled versions normally have a 1280x in their name)
2. Archive Download (click on "Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and some GP or Credits required)
3. The "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual image (in case you prefer to download image by image or you don't want to download an entire gallery

Base +19, DeamonHeart +8

Errors: Pg 3 - preatty
Pg 3 - Referring to money as "them" ?
Pg 6 - regret about
Pg 7 - know [how] you are feeling ?
Pg 7- mutch
Pg 12 - exited instead of excited
Pg 12 - where instead of were
Pg 16 - nowere
Pg 21 - mi
Pg 26 - land instead of lend ?
Pg 27 - donward

Base +8, Entei Nevermore +6, andrenix +7, orasmase +8

The post nut clarity is hitting me hard after this one. What the hell am I doing?

Base +4, Hansuke +7, dunnoaboutdis -6

Adding tag based on balloondraw's comment.

Base +15, orasmase +8