edit: still some mistakes, but not enough to keep the tag. By the way, nobody uploads this to other sites. Scrapers automatically crawl EH and rip content every X hours for Y time.

Also, I just noticed you used the downsized versions of the images. The original raw gallery is sitting at 1554 x 2199. You can download the Archive, the non-downsized torrent, OR click every image, scroll down, and click "Download Original". Don't just right click => save images.

Please proofread. A lot of these mistakes can be caught by simply writing the script in a Word or Google doc.

rough grammar (prob more mistakes than what I put below) - 35 TLd pages

every page: missing commas
magic power/mana => make up your mind xd
title: 輪姦 specifically refers to gang rape

p.4 and than suddenly => then
p.4 [not grammar related] hobby => fetish/tastes. 趣味 is often used for this, and although its usual definition is "hobby", in this context it refers to what he likes (i.e fetishes)
p.6 are normal => is normal. or pluralize "counts"
p.6 we're all good here than => then
p.6 contant => content
p.7 by the ways => way
p.8 and get over it already => wrong expression. "and get it over with already"
p.9 jelous
p.11 even sexier than normally => than normal
p.17 cum inside her pussy and ass => you make it sound like he's telling someone else to do it, when he's talking about himself. "I'm cumming [...]"
p.27 embarassing
p.28 embrassing

Last edited on 15 March 2022, 03:05.

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Thanks for the input
I actually didn't expect anyone to read this that carefully
I hope whoever uploads this to other sites uses the version with those corrections

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Most uploads to other sites aren't manual, they'll have both because it's an automated process.
Pururin will have the best quality available eventually but you really shouldn't worry too much about that. Just have the best version on EH and what other sites want to do is their own responsibility.

Good to see someone actually fixing errors, a lot of people on EH will procrastinate improvement to "next upload" instead of polishing anything.

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Thank's a lot. I've been waiting for this!

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