Argh, I removed 0.5 pts because she say "Arf" instead of "Wan" and "Brother" instead of "Onii-chan". Too much cuteness is lost by things like that. But beside that I liked it and english does make it easier to read without concentrating too much.
Base +3, Jakk16 +8, TheGoubert +6, Dorseen +5, Soldier A -6, jason12052011 +7, Harvest13 -6, LilyPeaches -7, smileyrat -6