Chapter 6 of the long-running fantasy comic by Feretta

Art is not mine; you can find the autor:
as GenuineFeretta here on e-hentai
http://www.feretta.net/
https://twitter.com/GenuineFeretta
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/feretta
https://beta.furrynetwork.com/feretta/
https://e621.net/post/index/1/feretta
http://feretta.deviantart.com/
http://feretta.tumblr.com/

Chapter 1: /g/624754/ef259699d6/
Chapter 1.5: /g/634713/8c022e9b68/
Chapter 2: /g/778147/28be2b3b75/
Chapter 3: /g/945018/9c3719e4a5/
Chapter 4: /g/1144559/31718c9497/
Chapter 5: /g/1542521/5179e9293f/

@ssj782 light likes to bounce off stuff so: how can someone possibly give some shape to a black object?
Simple, by not using pure black on all the object and blending the reflected light from the surroundings, especially if said object is partially in shadow like in the panels you are refering to.
Wait isn't most of the building a mix of greys and browns...

And as a last counter-argument /s/c5fc0e16a5/634713-6 last panel: isn't that a trail-less construct? No wait, there are two! ;)

I have no idea what this is about, but I appreciate and enjoy the worldbuilding.

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Uh... So the "current world" is just a piece of the original planet? O.O

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@herearesomething
After that kerfuffle at the end of the First Era this may not be even a piece of the original planet.
Coil, it may be even not a piece of a planet at all, given they were forced to go full SPC-████ to restore the population after the first... accident, let's put it this way.
At least the planet was still more or less intact at the time - for a certain definition of intact, that is...

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Time for a new running commentary, and none of you can stop me.

Page 3 - Hell yeah, I love reading lore.

Page 6 - That's a really cool motorcycle, but @TheGenuineFeretta does a charge crystal burn clean?

Page 9 - I forsee problems with this girl.

Page 15 - There must not be black powder in this universe, be cause rocks most certainly can be picked.

Page 40 - "Further the science of magic" is this what an aneurysm feels like?

Page 45 - Nice, very classy, Fen.

Page 52 - I'm not sure how this COULD go wrong, but I am sure that it WILL go wrong.

Page 100 - I'm sure this penguin is a reference to Penguin House Publishing.

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Absolutely enjoying the world building!
Also, I need to see Mirial get some action soon. Rawr!

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Feretta has come such a long way with their artwork and it’s incredible!

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"Pot of Rage"...
Is this going to be a reoccuring joke like the Fork of Truth in Looking for Group?

Ok, page 33 got me laughing.
Nice to see people being so enthusiastic with BDSM in a comic NOT about BDSM, and the best part, it´s meant as training in a non-BDSM sense.

Huge sword with chain on the grip, Feretta, did you rewatch Bleach?
But seriously, if you go for using the black sutff to form swords, check out Shadiversity on YouTube about sword design.
It might help you to find a balance point between fantasy swords and something that would make sense from a purely practical standpoint.

Evil manipulative Dragoness has black horns, red skin and blonde hair... Feretta, you are not letting your italian hatred for Germans guide you there?

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@The Chronicler
It's pure natural electrical storm energy, so yes. Clean as can be. Reusable too.

@ssj782
I think you'll find that she can swing it completely fine, and it's made of magic. Upkeep on an object this small and simple doesn't leave a visible trail. Also Meeka is using Cronin, which is brown, but it's glowing, and glowing brown becomes soft yellow. It doesn't affect the actual magic, she's still connected to Cronin. Don't worry about it.

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Remember back when this was a comic about a dick girl who got thrown out of her village presumably because of the dick? I member.
Seriously tho, been following on and off for years now, nice to see some more concrete world building. Cant wait for more!

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@ssj782
The difference is between conjuration and upkeep. While the object is being formed, it's being formed from raw Hadalen essence, which is the black smoke you see. When it's fully formed, upkeep is a lot lower. Also, the whip is very slightly brown because it has yellow sunlight hitting it.

Also, I built this world, I think I know how it works. :p I'm the creator of it.

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Sir, I believe you'll find you are mistaken. Go back as early as chapter 2, page 25 and 26, which is the previous time she conjured this exact same object. Smoke when conjuring, no smoke when not, lights up as a physical object in the natural light of day. And that's back when I was way worse at light (and everything else). Or chapter 3, pages 25-36, where the weapons Fen conjures up clearly stop smoking after conjuring, and all the tentacles are made of the same material, but aren't smoking. Or chapter 3, pages 43-49. Wagon is conjured, weapon is conjured, takes on the yellow glow of the light, no smoke after conjuring.

In fact, the only time you've seen a conjuration continue to drool essence is when the spell is complex enough to be an entire person, such as shadow Mis, or the Twins. Lamb even makes a note of how "it takes a lot of focus to maintain a spell like that" in the first chapter of the comic. And even then, her conjured object doesn't show the smoke, only her own tail tip.

The objects have never been fully black, either, there's always been a blue sheen to most of them, but in direct sunlight, with a yellow sun, it's going to be hit by yellow light. It's ALSO going to get hit by bounce light from her body and the area around her. Her body, robes, the floor AND the light source are all yellow. But if you wanna talk breaking the rules, Jennifer's conjured twin is fully colored.

And don't worry, my face is fine.

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She’s want to fuck the dragon again in her new form. Calling it.

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Page 22:

My dear lady... When a mad scientist, even a very sexy one, wants to do experiments on you... You RUN!!! :-D

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Page 22:

Quick! Someone get a Newspaper! A light swat on the nose works. If that doesn't work. Spray bottle full of water.

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"As a researcher, I can't even BEGIN to imagine the possibilities this could lead to!"

As a reader, I *can* imagine at least half those possibilities involve sex (hurray! 😈). The other half is a complete mystery though.

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I could never have imagined, since reading chapter 1 back when it was still in progress, that the story could evolve into something as amazing as this series has.

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@FantisKnight A guide to spawning adds. But in hindsight I see I should've put "This text is unimportant".

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Well, what would make the writing better, in your opinion, Hyperfapz0r?

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There's nothing wrong with the writing, pay no attention to these wannabe ace critics. This site has too many lurking here, and they crave attention and drama.

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Absolutely lethal tease right there

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And just like that Trillions and trillions of sperm died that day in the great blueball massacre T-T

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Time for a shadow clone gangbang. I'll admit I laughed when I read the page.

@Willie29
Its a gangbang when one of those people can use shadow magic to make duplicates of herself.

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Page 33: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH oh boy, the clones faces!

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Lol. Even the clones look excited.

"You have trouble making physical constructs? Let's offer sex as the rew..... Wow. You grow quick that way."

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I only noticed the OwO faces now. lol

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Sex as a teaching exercise, talk about positive reinforcement!

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@Daneasaur Uh? I think you might want to go re-read that chapter; she banged the bandit as thanks for helping Vix.

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YES I was hoping for more relationship building stuff between Fen and Vix! I absolutely love the development between them

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@nuggistrike Dude, first of all, relax, it's the second time you've tried this and we did see it the first time :p

Second, it's called having priorities. Of course she's not gonna just get up and fuck off halfway across the world outta nowhere, we have things to do first. We'll get to it, eventually. And who's gonna punish her? Mis? For what? Losing control and accidentally killing a few people half of Fen's lifetime ago in a small town way down across the world?

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I like that Among Us easter Egg with her training partners having only one bone in the body.

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"Yellow sus!"
Why are you accusing people like that?
Ferreta sus. [voted]

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That single bone in that body looks like an Among Us reference to me!

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Bout time Meeka is getting some play, poor girl is probably pent up after all the exhibitions she witnessed.

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I think I've reached the point where the sex scenes are starting to feel like filler. Guess it's a testament to how well-written the story is. xD

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"Damaged, but alive"
Good thing they have magic, because there's no way in hell she'd be able to keep that arm or leg otherwise.
Also, the bone showing in that thigh makes it look like it takes up 60-70% of the leg. That's a thick ass bone...

Edit: The more i look at her, the more I think she may be a construct of some kind. She obviously has some relation to the mc, though. Maybe a biodroid?

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I love the fact that we started on an Avatar-esque universe with low tech and elemental magic, but the "past" of the universe was a Type-II Civilisation, with science-powered immortals, warp drives and black-hole bombs.

Keep it up, Feretta.

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PG84: "Goddammit we just finished fixing that!"

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what else do you do when your universe could literally be consumed be a cosmic horror at a moments notice

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Grinning dragon Fen is my new favorite thing.

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I CAST FIST

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Finally. We deserve new lewds.

She is going to take both, isn't she.

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“ Is cheating just not a thing in this world.”

Pretty much. One of those comic descriptions at the bottom of a page said you can love one person and still have sex with others.

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It would seem Vix is delivering, and Fen is one of those cartoon dads whose brain breaks while their partner's in the maternity ward.

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I hadn't thought twice about the chapter cover art. But two collars and a leash strap are what's on the pillow and in the art...

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Aaaaw, this is cute.

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I wouldn't mind if this were the ending.
"they got married and lived a happy life together"
Just show me their kids growing up happily and I'm set.

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I smell some death flags.

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3 years to finish 1 chapter. I ain't complaining. It was a good year...I mean chapter.

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Looks aren't everything when it comes to love, jmaster. One day you'll understand.

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You try saying that l4chuga the next time you try to take an ugly girl out somewhere.

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I have sir, more than once, and now I am happily married to her!

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Is it me or is the sex in this story getting more and more sporadic? Like, the first couple of chapters read like the author had a few kinky scenarios in mind, and the story was about how to get our characters where they needed to be for those scenarios to happen, and so they'd have the right kind of emotional punch to be more than just mindless fucking. But now it's dragging on with no clear direction as to where it wants to go (even on a chapter-by-chapter basis), and the sex now feels like a bone to be thrown to the reader. And sure, making a world read consistently when writing about a bunch of fantastical creatures with equally fantastical powers is appreciated, but taking long pauses to explain things instead of just letting them happen... At times it feels like if 'The Empire Strikes Back' revolved entirely around Luke's training on Dagobah. It's interesting, but if it were the only thing that we're seeing, I'd feel as impatient as Luke by the end.

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