3rd page should probably include a T/N what pronoun he actually uses (my guess is "ore") and what that implies about his gender presentation. (Japanese has gendered first person pronouns)
Finally, somebody doing something from Fuusen Club; thanks you so much, I was really looking forward to reading this on English. Many thanks to DeYeti too.
Base +7, yupokamusi -7, NewhalfIsMale +10, thekiller2413 +6