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wow thats some good galley

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Thank for an actual translation

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Compared to the other TL, this one has better typesetting, a smoother translation, darker leveling, and no sfx translations.

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I like this one better. I was tricked by center panel in page 14 that it was uncensored too. We can only hope

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Much better translation than either of the other English ones (though there were some small issues like crowded speech bubbles). You can tell a doujinshi is good when it has people competing to make good English translations.

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Any idea why she has her limbs replaced in the last page?

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@Alexaction393 either the incubus in some way removed her limbs (melting, magic, etc) or she willingly cut them off to get them replaced as a way to get stronger, as the info blurb explains.

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I'm slowly working to do a fan coloring. Here's my quick attempt at a few pages: https://imgur.com/a/sEGuDIk

Lemme know if I should even bother continuing with this or if you got any tips/critique cause I ain't a photoshop guru.

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@Soul Striker: It looks good so far, though I would lighten the color of the flesh walls and tentacles in order to maintain a bit more contrast with the, uh, victim. In the cover photo, the flesh walls and tentacles seem to have a bit more pink to them while her clothes seem to have a bit more gray and a bit less blue, which helps with contrast. Otherwise, good work!

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@Soul Striker Looks great dude. What @Absolute_Jushin said too but I hope you continue working on it!

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@Absolute_Jushin
@kytos

Yeah, I definitely agree. I made a few changes to one of the panels here: https://imgur.com/a/zH0Q5Qw

- Edited the gradient maps to align much more closely to the cover page. Open to change the saturation a bit more if it's too desaturated.
- Added a small vignette and my attempt at some of the fog you can see in the cover page.

Let me know if this still needs any tweaks cause I wanna get the gradients just right before I bother with the other pages. The workflow for the new panel is a bit more intensive than the old one, so if anyone has any tips speeding up creating layer masks (which by far takes the most time), I'm all ears.

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@Soul Striker Digging the changes. I think her skin tone could maybe use some saturation, but other than that I think this looks very close to how the cover works color-wise.

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Is unfortunate but the author just declared he is gonna take a break from manga. On a side note this dude became rich with this one doujin alone.

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jesus fucking christ was that hot, really well made

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