I'm currently working on a sequel to the dungeon series(see below for the link). So I took the 6 dungeon characters out of mothballs and I try to give them a new look by making them evolve from Aiko3 to V4.
All things considered, my 6 characters will only appear in the 2nd chapter:
you will find the first dungeon serie here :
https://www.blogger.com/blog/post/edit/3714298317767801444/6925122592945785311
https://www.blogger.com/blog/post/edit/3714298317767801444/81148163282146273
https://www.blogger.com/blog/post/edit/3714298317767801444/6401431593477730500
https://www.blogger.com/blog/post/edit/3714298317767801444/8928241060339086563
https://www.blogger.com/blog/post/edit/3714298317767801444/6543087379757308152
only in french or speechless .

Your story is good, and I can see that you really want to make a good story, but your 3D modeling is... It's not very flattering. Can you take a look at other people's work and improve the 3D modeling, otherwise it will affect the reader's perception...

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