While i would really like to have a translation i think that if you are going to machine translate a Doujin you should proofread it a bit and try to fix-up the text a bit so it makes more sense as this is kind of a mess.

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"a mess" doesn't quite cut it... clusterfuck is closer to the truth

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Seriously. This one is SO MUCH in the realm of "rough translation" that the ENTIRE text should be posted as a comment. Don't have time for that.

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If someone were to provide a good translation, I'd be willing to make a passable edit. I'd rather read nothing than something that has zero quality control...

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I can handle the bad translation, but damn if those lowercase i's drive me nuts

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Someone please save this doujin from this translator!

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Anyone should be allowed to make and post a translation if they want too, and that means you too, uploader. But there is a point where a translation can tarnish the image of the original content, and this translation has crossed that line.

Having a decent understanding of the language you are translating into would be a good start. Proper grammar and punctuation is absolutely vital, and it's okay to tweak sentences so that they make more sense. This alone could have made this translation passable.

I'm not saying you should stop. I AM saying that you need to improve. And maybe find some people to share your work with before posting them in the galleries. We have forums, please use them.

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Terrible, just terrible. I am going to wait for a different translation, I guess.

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Jesus Christ this doujin didn't deserve this treatment. Unlike Drakath, I AM saying you should stop. And since you clearly don't care about your product at all, I won't care about posting this mean critique. This is the laziest thing I've ever seen. Zero effort in all stages. Machine translated, zero editing of said translation, copy pasted raw machine translated text into text bubbles, not even attempting to fit the text to the size of the bubbles... And the most damning thing is that posting these reduces the chances of someone competent doing it instead.

You would somehow actually have a better product if you just typed in your own story into it without ever having seen the machine translation.

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it's becoming sci-fi now…

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Part 2: /g/1457607/4c07218acb/
Part 3: /g/1457608/b4c25488b1/
Part 4: /g/1584475/3b89b98525/
Part 5: /g/1780617/35d744f62e/ Alt: /g/1782844/d11b189aa8/
Part 6: /g/1846952/daccdc2b38/
Part 7: /g/2193622/d79b339149/ (you are here) Alt: /g/2283580/f2d98b98ac/
Part 8: /g/2263288/c84514ea36/
Part 9: /g/2282054/38edf19e08/

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