RAW(JP) : https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/95614015
KR : /g/2144083/e127dc0645/

First of all, I apologize for many grammatical and linguistic errors. I'm a Korean translator who translates just as a hobby, and I have only completed the basic English curriculum in Korea.
So, if people who know Japanese or Korean well, please give me feedback, I'll fix it right away :)
I translated this to support artist Sanatuki. I would be pleased if you could support the artist in any way. He's my favorite :)
Thank you everyone.
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Sorry... Some pages were incomplete. Now fixed.

I can appreciate the effort, but your English needs a loooot of work.

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Grammar issues.

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i hope there will be more work from this artist translated.

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Well... I worked hard, but I don't think it worked out well. I'm sorry about the grammar issues.
If anyone points out a major error here, I'll fix it as soon as I check it.

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Yeah, the grammar really need some work, but I can still understand the story and what is going on, so thank you for going trough the effort of translating it.
The biggest error here is using the word Oni, the anime in English is called "Demon Slayer" and the monsters are also referred to as demons there.

Also if you want help in clearing up the grammar, Posting the Dialogue as text would make it easy for people to rewrite it and show you the corrected version.

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Oh, I didn't realize that. Thanks!
And about the dialogue, I don't know where to post it. Is it okay that if I post it as comment here?
If anybody found errors, please comment here! Fixing will be done several days later, cause I'm translating artist's new artwork now. Thank you!

Last edited on 19 April 2022, 06:34.

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@Uhrara
Don't sweat it man. Just keep improving it as you learn.
I'd take your translation over any other of those low effort MLT attempts any day

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