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They deserve second chance 😢

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edit: yeah just read the prequel, felt like something was missing

couldn't see the prequel at first because its blocked by my tags as bbw, even if she isn't...

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What an extremely adorable art style with even cuter looking characters, I really hope there is a part 3 but I guess this is the end.

Very warm work, just fuzziness all around

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@mish2001 there is a prequel ...

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@mish2001 read the TL note on P1, this is a sequel to Mori Manpei's previous work:
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Happy end?

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Muh fragile heart.

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That epiphany on the bottom panel of pg. 6...that's rough. It was good that he was decisive after the realization.

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LETS FUCKING GOOOOO!

HEART BONER AND BONER SATIESFIED!

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Just a few editiorial notes:

1. Punctuate. It's a necessity in English, even if JP doujin rarely do so. This means periods at the end and commas where they need to be.
2. Glottal stops (っッ) are kinda weird to translate, but you can do one of these: a) Wait! (just a !); b) Wai— (cut the word, add an em dash); or c) Wait... What you don't wanna do is Wait- (full word with a hyphen). Usually a) is the most common.
3. Watch out for redrawing. You take all that time to do SFX, and then sometimes leave half-redrawn bubbles xd
4. When you hyphenate, you always do it at the first half:

To-
day

and not

To
-day

Last edited on 07 May 2022, 08:08.

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Soooo she was whoring when she was younger....

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@cutegyaru Thank you very much for the feedback, I'll keep these in mind when doing future projects. Though I have some replys to Point 3. :
1) All I have with me is Photoshop 2020 and a mouse, no CPS, no drawing tablet, so redraws involving curves is hard, especially lines with variable thickness.
2) Cloning stamp is the mvp of my redraws, but if there is not enough to sample, it'll turn out ugly Instead. Also I can't find the exact screetones artists use most of the time.
3) Onomatopoeia involving wet sounds is HARD for me to translate, eg. Page 20 & 21, how should I translate kissing sounds? How does a wet pussy sound like? Shlick shlick? Gush gush? I can use shlick only so many times before it losses the lewdness.

All in all, these are great learning experience for the future.

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@Chang Wui
1) Yeah, I get that. Ironically, I think redrawing (i.e connecting) bubble lines is a lot simpler than all the other redrawing that you do xd
2) I have no comment on the rest of the redraws. It's painful and time-consuming, but it gets easier with practice.
3) Yeah, SFX and onomatopoeia are a world in themselves. Sometimes there's clear equivalents; other times, you just have to build a library in your head xd For kissing sounds, for example: smack, slurp, lick, smooch, mwah, etc. You can take a look at how some of the localizers/pros go about it for inspiration.

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It's for the best that he didn't continue with the other girl, because if it feels like you're "applying" for a job when it comes to a girl, call it off. If they make you jump through hoops and basically force you in a subordinate role, they are not that into you. Same goes for other areas in life. I unfortunately had to learn it the hard way that it is better to walk away in those cases, even if you don't have a lot of options.

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Wholesome whores deserve a second chance.

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