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the title LMAO

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Christ, I read the author comments on a whim and page 60 is just lol. Seriously even if you hate NTR or whatever, just read that page.

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oh god what happened at the end!! he confessed and they have sex? she recorded it to show it to the douchebag? god im so horny

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Damn, NTR... Art is really nice and the girl looks cute though.

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@Thanks

Yikes... I shouldn't have read that. I've always had a hunch that artist who focused on NTR had feelings like that, but jeez.

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So, autor just said that he is a cuck, right?

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The art is amazing

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that was fast LOL

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Damn, that's some top incel rant at page 60

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What a godlike artstyle, holy shit, contender for one of the best looking doujins in 2022 already

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Damn this art is fucking great

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I wonder how the author's grandma gonna react to his page 60 rant. Obasan, sore o yondeimasuka???

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Nice rant from mister author. I hope he remembers that, while there are assholes like that IRL, real life also has something most hebtai lack: probabilities. The more of an asshole you are, the bigger the chance someone will get really angry at you. Anyway, everyone reaches the end hollow. Also, a tip to stop hating women: treat them like people. You might start hating people, but you are wrong if you don't do it already.

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Hmm , the author rant about bad boi stereotype is a bit off , because if it is real life , lawsuit will come down hard by women , just accuse them something something and kaching , money ! You can be the bad boi and sleep with as many women as you want , just be careful when one day a childcare lawsuit arrive , ugh . Women nowadays generally favor a lot in the court so you sort of screw up if you end up having a trial . So asshole can be asshole in hentai because there is no real world lawsuit .

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always okay with Marushin, but I kinda wish there was more nakadashi...

now who to blame in this... the mc who pussied out when they were about to fuck? or the fmc as usual

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That rant was kinda... Weird I guess. I know authors like to put some degree of realism either to spice it up or to not completely destroy the sense of belief with the scenes they portrait however this is one of those works were the female lead it's just another dumbass slut so yeah you're welcome to tell me about IRL assholes author-san but you also pretty much admitted you are a cuck and most likely hate women kek. I suppose that's why he added that line about her being married in a future...

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>I love women's bodies but I might after all hate women, no, I mean it, I love them. Not really. I hate them after all.
His tsundere rant is hilarious

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Shes trash

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"Dumbass" is an interesting translation choice for DQN (delinquent).

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@Krozam
mmm you're right. obviously i translated the title before ending the script, and never changed it... although proofreader didn't say a thing about the word. he was like the rest of you, just talking about the rant lol.
Should i change it?

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The author is a fucking incel ranting about cheating stacys and girl-stealing chads. loool

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LMAO the rant at p60 LOLLL

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art is hot but as usual, with the rant, ntr is just shit. Author should drop the ntr, focus on more creative stories instead of bad end soap operas or maybe put the effort into making sure karma happens for the assholes. You'll feel better and have a better outlook on life if you aren't drowning yourself in depressing shit. More so when you, as the author, can change the outcome in any numbers of ways but choose the worst option every time. Try something different for fucks sake.

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God damn it, forced rimjob is always disgustingly hot.

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Hahahahaha, Marushin is a fucking fool for that author page. The internet (Because of course it's the fucking internet) is taking it too serious.

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That outfit with the yoga pants + sports bra at the end was hot as fuck.

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The male MC in this kind of looks like a younger version of the NTR-bastard from the volleyball one.
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HOLY SHIT THAT SPORT OUTFIT IS FREAKING AMAZING GOOD CHOICE HOLY CUM BUCKETS

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I read this work flopped on sales. Anyone got a site to check it's sales? NVM it just did and comments shamed him for his aftewords.

Author took a hiatus from drawing since last year twitter

Edit:
I've learned he got stage 3 cancer and was able to make it out alive and now he's back to do though there's some comments he should take it easy with his work and focus on his health.

Last edited on 04 September 2024, 14:57.

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@Jizz23

So he became a NTR-bastard because he found about her eventually?

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This is almost exactly like the volleyball story from this same author. If there was ever a point to drill home about how repetitive NTR is, then it's this author. His art is fine, but I really look at the feet and hands too to judge because those areas are the hardest to draw. And in doujins, there's the common sex pose females are drawn in that have their feet up, and if the artist cheap out on drawing them, that's pretty noticeable.

I didn't like the ending of this one though because it's basically a cliffhanger. It's an NTR story. So there's a 99.9% chance the ending will be shit and upsetting. So why even tease or even hint at Fukuyama having a chance at a solid relationship with Saki? Even the way she thinks about Fukuyama was off-putting. "I'm guessing his person is going to confess to me" and "He's so gentle like those days... so pure..." makes her sound like a condescending bitch because she really isn't considering Fukuyama's feelings anymore. The camera recording in her room proves she's doing this all for Miwa and her last thoughts "And even so... I..." is very foreboding. The author's notes are appreciated, but also rubs me the wrong way how he's more or less giving so many ways how Fukuyama can still keep getting cucked in the future by Saki and any other guys she will encounter. It's misery porn. The author is getting excited and reminiscing about some of his past experiences through this NTR story. I know the Western side of readers like to think their the Chad Thundercock, but if you needed anymore proof and validation that NTR is made for and design to be about a cuck rendered a passenger and background character in his own life to someone else, this is that proof.

And if you want to make a female character who has more sexual experiences compared to the guy she has a relationship with, you don't have to make it an NTR or cheating story. That's dumb and defeats the purpose as those stories would make the guy lose the female in the end. She can just have a past that doesn't have to resurface and ruin her current relationship. ou know, being a little original with the story couldn't hurt instead of copy-pasta NTR route.

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