I love her design im so glad i was able to commission this for a translation.

Thanks to Riigo and Midari.

到最后还是纯爱结局。

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This artist draws amazing thicc ladies, i wish more are translated

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While I love the setting character and art, the translation needs a lot of work... There are a lot of grammatical errors and just some overall weird pacing. Granted, I do not speak Japanese so I don't know how close it is to the source material. I can say however that reading it is a bit of a bumpy ride and takes me out of the story.

On a positive note, I now know who to not commission for trans

Last edited on 01 May 2022, 01:10.

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I hope you didn't pay too much for this.

rough grammar

p.2 of have => having
p.2 a young who desires loses => to lose
p.2 converted in human age => in human YEARS or TO human age
p.3 until the end of contract => of the contract
p.4 and make the lost of your => loss
p.4 being knocked => rammed?
p.4 my pussy will end being => end up
p.6 are being toyed while => being toyed with
p.6 that when this moment come => comes
p.8 even trying so hard => even by trying so hard
p.8 the fault it's from this smell => nonsensical
p.9 and the this mysterious smell => the or this

edit: don't worry. I'll re-do this. For free.
edit 2: Thanks, Dynellen.

Last edited on 30 April 2022, 22:07.

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I read the raw for this a while ago and knew something was off right away. This looks like a double-translation from a (really bad) Chinese release. I feel bad for them too.

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>check sadpanda for new releases
> super **THICC** dark elf on cover
> Not NTR
> Translated
> LETS FUCKING GO
> Rough grammer tag
> oh no
>Sees cutegyaru comment and examples of it.
>OH NO

Every time, Every damn time! :|

Damn dude you paid for this? You got scammed man.

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I've waited so long for a translation

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@cutegyaru: I have this commissioned from Brolen, editing in progress. So don't waste your time.

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Every time i read "copulate" LOL

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How much did you paid for this, Ronnie?

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I can see that this post is getting positive and negative comments with a lot of questions.
I will say i appreciate the ones that got to enjoy this getting translated, for the negative and comments that are asking how much it cost...well ill say i go it at a good $ per page pricing and i appreciate the work that was done by both the translator and editor.
If any one wants to try to fix it go ahead maybe try it with the "Hair Version" of the milf.

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And the guy missed the very last page? Damn buddy you just got scammed.

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yo wheres the hairy armpits version?

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I'm done after 10 pages this is unreadable!

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Wow wow wow

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Guys, I'm very sorry about my grammar. Yeap, it's terrible. Yeap, I'm not an native speaker. Yeap, I'm embarrassed to death. And yeap, I'm trying improve that. This was made in a terrible pace and at a terrible time of my life (I didn't even had time to check the reviews) so I beg your pardon and I promise I will focus on get better on a lot of things. In fact, I'm happy my problem is with english and not japanese, I'm very confident that this is much easier to fix than otherwise. But let me say just one thing, I'm not a scam. I'm just a guy who has a lot of problems and is trying his best to solve those problems. Hope you guys understand.

Last edited on 15 May 2022, 17:04.

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