I did it again...
Go give show your love to the Original Artist:
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/7026506
*Now featuring proper english thanks to Jack735

p1
"trying 5o not fall" -> "trying not to fall" (clearly the worst one here because it indicates you didn't do even the most cursory spellcheck before posting)
"I've never hear" -> "I've never heard"
"haven't do anything" -> "haven't done anything"
p2
"such a torturous" -> "such torturous"
p3
"raped by man" -> "raped by a man"
p4
"this kind of things" -> "this kind of thing"

That's three times as much as you'd need to qualify for the "rough grammar tag" in only 4 translated pages

Base +7, Bastille +19, Medde +6, opodin +7, Orazio +6, Aratamari +6, yoshi245 +7, WaRiUr +10, IS IRIS +6, mobilecameron +6, supernova708 +9, Sugarsparkle +9, srock8994 +6, and 1 more...

Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

Base +11, Glovelove. -17, IS IRIS -6, Ultros13 -11, mobilecameron -6, TKLF -16, srock8994 -6, Kirito_Morina -6, Overheated -15