I know some of the changes are not great. Like the one on page #3 about the emblem. But you are supposed to put some text to cover the mess. And I did my best.

这算是开源版本吗？「笑」

Base +2, saber7777777 +6

how is this not tagged lolicon? p2,4,8,9 (her figure in left corner). Even if just p9 it should count for low loli
I've seen galleries with more similar if not developed body than her get tagged so ( /g/1018961/1d5cd4f63d/ ) yet this one doesn't get tagged loli. If that doesn't count as loli neither should these if anyone can vote, downvote loli in :
/g/609172/0f7a1d7132/ p25
/g/1566298/0242431a13/
/g/1509122/51a636f0f5/ p 3, 17 not loli

Base +13, youwotm8_ -6