Original gallery: /g/2076592/2bdcdcc4d2/?p=1

I discovered it looking at the artist's other work that has been translated to English. And I was curious about what was going on in this. Once again, mostly machine translated, which means I let machine translation do most of the work, but check it with my meager knowledge of Japanese and breaking down the sentence if it wasn't clear.

One thing I like what this artist did was to include clean versions of each page. It made it much easier to do the process of cleaning the page for the thought bubbles, the semi transparent bubbles.

Support the original artist: https://www.dlsite.com/home/work/=/product_id/RJ360857.html

I could mirror what plenty of others are going to tell you. I could complain about how you didn't even edit half of these machine translations, and that your contributions likely made them less legibile. I could point out how your typesetting is dogshit, let alone how you couldn't even bother centering the text. I could even use you as a launchpad to complain about how this is a symptom of how the pandemic has resulted in waves of homebound idiots thinking that contributing garbage galleries like this is a good way to waste time.

But instead, I think I'll settle for pointing out that despite your claim of having even a meager understanding of japanese, and despite being the most frequently used term in this entire translation, you couldn't even be bothered doing a quick google search to find out that 義兄 is clearly translating to step-brother in this scenario instead of brother-in-law. Congratulations Shinji, you somehow turned what would simply be a shitty translation into a shitty rewrite.

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I always thought that brother/sister in law meant that they're your spouse's sibling.

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a new day, another dogshit TL. im so done, lmao.

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I not going to get mad at this dude for trying but can someone please re-translate this one? all I want to see is this artist's futa CG Sets translated decently, its just this one and the two mojo majo sets. can some rich dude please do me this favor and put the money down for a group to do them.

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Oh my god please someone retranslate my god was this hard to read 90% made no sense and you can clearly see it was google translate this was a complete ass translation and it needs a new one with someone who does good translations asap

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this guy draws the hottest futas ever i stg

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Rough grammar
p1 Is widely -> are widely
too well developed -> over-developed
when relationship -> their relationship
who who -> who
begs -> begged
she will -> she would
disappears -> disappeared
loves sister-in-law -> loves his sister-in-law
loves brother-in-law -> loves her brother-in-law
p2 just a one year -> even a single year
From today -> From now on
I don't know, I don't know -> (Redundant, only one)
p3 not familiar with class -> not used to my classes
befoe -> before
without seeing -> without noticing
p4, but my -> to my
bath -> bathe
p6 brothe -> brother
masturbation in -> masturbated in
leaving the door of the room open so he can see on purpose -> leaving the door on purpose so he can peep
put in -> put on
p7 when excited -> when he's excited
he's watching -> he was watching

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really hot…. if I could ignore the horrendous TL

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>mostly machine translated
tagging rtl (uploader comment)

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