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[Saiyazumi] Don | Desire (COMIC EroChari 2011-06) [English] [Revelations72]

[さいやずみ] 貪 (コミックエロチャリ 2011年6月号) [英訳]

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Posted:2022-05-19 11:29
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Language:English  TR
File Size:17.81 MiB
Length:9 pages
Favorited:204 times
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Posted on 19 May 2022, 11:29 by:   Revelations72    PM
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For commission or contact:
Email me at [email protected]
Or send me a PM on E-Hentai forum
Posted on 19 May 2022, 17:11 by:   Daruna    PM
Score +79
You really think you should be advertising commissions on output like this, huh?
Posted on 19 May 2022, 17:14 by:   Revelations72    PM
Score -98
Care to explain what's wrong with my output?
Posted on 19 May 2022, 17:16 by:   Daruna    PM
Score +125
I suggest you go look at the comments on your previous galleries, I won't be repeating what's already been said and what you've been ignoring.

As to how to address those issues:

https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/vorbis-typesetting-guide/fonts
https://translatoranon.tumblr.com/tagged/guide
https://guidetojapanese.org/learn/
https://www.amazon.com/Integrated-Elementary-Japanese-Vocabulary-Academic/dp/B08QV3CV21/

You are not an automaton which needs to be told what to do. You have a functioning brain. Compare your work against anyone else's work on this site and see the issues for yourself. I'm not your QC.

You decided to start telling people you're available to be paid to do this. You no longer get to hide behind laziness. You no longer get to make low-effort galleries. I do it for free (he does it for freeeee!) and my uploads wipe the floor with yours, which you advertise as being good enough for someone to pay money for. Do better.
Posted on 19 May 2022, 17:18 by:   Revelations72    PM
Score -100
I don't ignore them. I fix anything wrong. So if you have any problem, just say it.

Are you saying that my Japanese is bad? I work hard to keep my text as accurate as possible. And about the font, this is Comic Neue, not Comic Sans. Pay more attention.
Posted on 19 May 2022, 17:27 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +224
Alright, I'll bite. We already know your Japanese needs a lot of work, and unless you've magically become proficient in 2 weeks, I fail to see why you insist on pumping these out.

Your editing is also very subpar.

1. Your font fucking sucks. I don't care what kind of Comic Sans clone you're using, it blows. Use an actual "comic" font like Wild Words, CCVictorySpeech, Spinner Rack BB, etc.
2. Your kerning is awful. There's like 3 extra lines of blank space between every line.
3. Your English is stilted and stiff. It sounds like you're trying to do a 1:1 translation while keeping Japanese words and grammatical structures intact. This isn't how you translate. You need to both a) maintain original meaning/intent, but also b) make it sound natural in the target language.
4. You've been asking for money since your FIRST release. Your motivations are so transparent it kinda hurts. If you're gonna ask for commissions, then you need to reach MUCH higher standards, else you just come across as someone trying to make a quick buck off some idiot who doesn't know any better.

To add to the guides above:

General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

edit: some rephrasing
Last edited on 19 May 2022, 17:56.
Posted on 19 May 2022, 17:30 by:   Revelations72    PM
Score -100
How professional of you. "My uploads wipe the floor with yours." Just because you posted more? Just because of the font you use? And in the meantime you get to shit on other translators for anything you don't agree to. Grow the fuck up.
Posted on 19 May 2022, 17:34 by:   SandwichChef    PM
Score +92
If you can't accept criticism gracefully then shut the fuck up and stop posting, Revelations.
Posted on 19 May 2022, 17:34 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +154
>experienced scanlators give you advice and resources
>WHAT, HOW DARE YOU! I'M JUST AS GOOD AS YOU ARE!
>oh also gimme money teehee!

This isn't a matter of "agreeing" with your methods. Your JP needs a lot of work. Your editing sucks. These are facts. You pump out awful translations and wonder why the fuck people shit on you. Look at every gallery you posted. Do you see a pattern? Or do you want to keep living in your world of delusions?

I've given you resources and ways to improve. The rest is on you.
Last edited on 19 May 2022, 17:49.
Posted on 19 May 2022, 17:38 by:   Daruna    PM
Score +114
Sorry, I didn't realize I was in a customer service job. Do excuse my lack of "professionalism," Valued Customer.

No, my work isn't better than yours just because I posted more works than you (utterly unrelated to the quality of a work, argumentum ad passiones - F, see me after class), nor is it better than yours just because of the font I use. I trust you can figure it out after simply looking at one of them. Hint: I actually know Japanese. That tends to help.

I'm shitting on you because you are trying to make a quick, exploitative buck in a space I'm passionate about. You have no passion.
Posted on 20 May 2022, 01:33 by:   Ronnie42    PM
Score -97
im okay with this, i knew what they were saying and the text is bold enough so i dont have too squint or make the page bigger.

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