>so this could even be a rewrite
Does that justify the tag?

Base +16, Glovelove. -25

Rough grammar
p4 day of discharge -> discharge day
as before -> as there was before
p5 how it would feel like -> what it would feel like
and detox -> and the detox
p7 glans is -> glans are
p10 boys penis -> boy's penis
your boobs -> our boobs
p11 boobs start -> boobs are starting
p17 not leaving -> not leave
p18 seing -> seeing
p20 I went in -> it went in
p23 lets -> let's

Base +42, Glovelove. +22

adding rough translation: uploader title, content

Base +47