Heya! so uhm, this is the work i posted after almost a year of the last post (not that anyone cares). I admit i'm a bit anxious of posting this since i don't think the story is that good ^^; but maybe i'm just worried too much about it.

I've been working on this one for like months, most of the reason is i'm kinda busy with life, and well the rest of it is i'm just so lazy and play games instead ahah XD.But here it is, a Koikatsu manga(?) thats made without any complete manuscript because i skipped that part and just work on the pages after pages without knowing how it will end. In the beginning, i thought it's manageable but as the time went on i kinda lost my vision of the story. So..it just kinda went with the flow and snowballed until this point. I will take this as a lesson and maybe i should have wrote a full manuscript of the story, from start to finish before working on the manga format itself.

As always, any feedback is appreciated as you might have noticed a mistake that i didn't notice when working or proofreading this. well, for now..i'm hoping that i can keep, and enjoy posting more of these work, and keep improving as i went on ^^

oh by the way, i'm planning to work on another story of "Cybermaiden Naomi", or a new set of character named Emily (a demon) and her servants. only time will tell how long it will take hahah XD

It's not always about the story. I really enjoyed the first one and I am happy you decided to make a continuation. Your work made me start learning koikatsu. Thank you for your hard work and I'm interested to see your future projects.

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@Cynicalos thank you soo much for your feedback *-* i really didnt expect my work would do what you've said. and somehow this gave me more confidence in myself haha xD i'll try my best to keep myself up and post more works in the future ^^)7

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Story is ok, but the sentence structure of the dialogue just sorta takes me out of it too often... but I'll chalk that one up to language barrier - I take it English is not your first language... and it's a very difficult language to naturally understand with so many unwritten rules for what makes a sentence feel right...

Other than that, the plot is fine.

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@sbrd95 phew..its a relief if u think the plot is fine, i was worried that it doesnt make any sense or it doesnt connect. And yeah, english isn't my first language ^^; sometimes i do get the feeling the sentence isn't right so i proofread it with well, my capability xD.. i'll try to improve the sentences and the dialogue overall too. thank you for the feedback, it means a lot *^*)b

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