Just noticed a new episode of this came out, I thought it was over

Really like the art in these, but this one is very short and kinda of bland

Enjoy

I really thought this story was over, I hope he impregnates his mom and fucks her pussy pregnant and more, let's go. :D

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He deserve her, definitely and they should really tie the knot by giving birth to a daughter, for future husband's investment.

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... sigh.

right out p.2

"You're father will be home soon."

"You are father..."

with all most every upload you would have at least 1 of this error, you seriously need to check all the "your" or "you're" in your work before upload.

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ya everyone likes to criticize but still no one offering to proof read, i even got a new editor with spell checking but it didn't catch that, its easier to miss those than you'd think apparently

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as today technology, I doubt any spell checking tool can see the error because they can only see typo but by standard grammar nothing is wrong with "you're" at the start of a sentence.

so to catch this kind of error the typesetter must known what the different of "your" to "you're"

by just typed the word "you're" then the next word "father" the typesetter must noticed the error already but this mix up happened a lot in all of your uploads.

which lead to either
the typesetter did not pay attention to what he/she typed, just typed as what they saw on the translated script by someone else, so the translator has problem of differentiating "your" with "you're", the typesetter is lazy drone didn't even understand what they typed down
or
if the translated script also done by the typesetter then the translator/typsetter really has problem of differentiating "your" with "you're"

first time it would be the write down of "you're father" at translate step by translator
then typed the text on to the image at typesetting step by typesetter
then the overall review by the editor

if all failed then it means one thing, they are all don't know the different of "your" to "you're",
it's easier to miss those because their brain did not recognized the error in seeing and reading the "you're father" since they have no clear concept of "your" to "you're".

Last edited on 12 June 2022, 11:44.

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Almost had a heart attack seeing a new chapter, was hoping it wouldn’t go back to the other kid ntr’ing the mom but thankfully it stuck to just the mom and son.

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It’s weird to me that the Father is around, because He was literally never brought up in the story at any point before this. It makes both MC and his Mom look bad (in my eyes) since they never even mention Him (and so assume that they don’t really care about Him, seriously, while the MC is freaking out in Ch1 after finding his Mom, He at no point thinks about what if He told his Dad/if his Dad somehow found out. And in Ch3 after the Mom finds MC with the Aunt, She never shows any concern about the idea of Him telling her Husband), and it makes the supposed “plan” the Aunt had to get the MC on board even stupider, because -on top of expecting the MC to go along with incest in the first place- it means She assumed the MC would never tell his Father what He saw.

It also kind of makes the Mother look EVEN WORSE for fucking the Cousin, because now it’s ACTUAL cheating/unfaithfulness, though at the very least might somewhat explain why She never tried anything at Home with the MC before the story.

If Nanao Yukiji does make more of this in the future, I’d be the most interested in seeing the entire story from the Mom’s perspective (from first finding her Sister and Nephew, to this After chapter) because I really want to know what Her feelings are about this ENTIRE situation. Despite being the lynchpin to this entire story, She really doesn’t feel like a proper character, more just… a trophy, the end goal for the MC to work towards, without any agency or motivation for Herself.

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Even with this ending, my soul still hurts.

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@Puddingdragon21

It's pretty clear Nanao Yukiji doesn't know how to write anything. This entire story from start to finish has been a disorganized mess with no clear direction. It probably started off as a shit-tier NTR story, then people got upset because of mommy milkers so he awkwardly pivoted into an incest story. Because they're incapable of making a satisfying ending and a coherent plot without contrivances, a dad / father is suddenly brought in because... reasons?

Some artists shouldn't write their own content.

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Can anyone tell me why 1st and 3rd part of this doujinshi removed from here

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@Hard londa
Their still up you just can't see them on the main site

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@hobohobo how can I see those ?

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this chapter made me appreciate the previous ones a bit more, liked seeing more of the mom and son. Hell i wouldn't mind extra extra, more of the shota with the aunt back at their house or something. even if its more of the same shit, them sneakily fucking around a father that was never mentioned previously

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There's a new extra chapter on the tank released by the artist

/g/2599578/aedbc79d46/

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