My first upload! Yay! (And probably my last, reason at the last page).

As you know, the current English translation of this doujinshi is too superior to comprehend, so I decided to make another version of it called "peasant" version which obviously, for us normal "peasant" to be able to understand. Enjoy!

Thank you artist B-Ginga for this amazing work.
Thank you user Pokom for uploading the Japanese digital version.
Thank you E-hentai for being existed and making our world better.
Thank you for reading.
Thank you, myself.

Support artist at: https://bginga.fanbox.cc/
Cover from: https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/78824895
Buying this doujinshi at:
+ https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=597798
+ https://ec.toranoana.jp/tora_r/ec/item/040030798393/

EDIT 1: I didn't know Discord's name is case sensitive, and it's not like I don't have friend and haven't added anyone before or anything. Ahem... anyway, it's: Kei#6122 (UPDATE: due to Discord's new update, I've changed my username, please use email if you want to contact me for some reason)

EDIT 2: For anyone wondering, this doujinshi got NTR tag because the author tagged it so. Yes, this doujinshi is tagged NTR by the author, and I just simply followed their decision.

- Eroissalvation -

I didn't understand what you meant by superior translation until I read it, and wow. It's a piece of art. People might use your translation as an accompaniament to understand the other one. Nice.

Base +13, CharlieHoang97 +6, ShiroiHebi +24, Isolation_Q +9, Zero225 +17, NaySlayer +6, Marisa Kirisame +8, Keksz +6, DoeJohnshi +6, FerKing +12

timmy tommy give me milk mommy

Base +17, asdfghfd +7, elefat224 +7, yutshu +6, Gentleman Chimera +8, gotl +16, johnnyspeeedwagon +7, Sotto +7, Keksz +6, SavageBlowJob +7, CeilingCat95 +8, aubrie paterson +6, Anon323 +15, and 1 more...

Dw, you don't need to run this solo, a lot of us don't.

A lot of scanlation is done by groups so that the workload can be spread out and people can specialise more in their specific role (translating, typesetting, decensoring and/or redrawing, ect. Also good to have at least one grammar nazi on board, lightens the load for proofreaders significantly) you can find groups on EH forums, use our bounty system to earn some fake money selling your translation to people who want to do their own editting (or the other way around), or just find a friend that shares your tastes and has a skillset that compliments yours.

Last edited on 14 June 2022, 16:49.

Base +18, ShiroiHebi +24, elefat224 +7, Isolation_Q +9, dfgghgf +6, Gentleman Chimera +8, Xiroam +10, Marisa Kirisame +8, Zakuzelo +14, Drevlik +6, Keksz +6, Cercospora +13, m42a +18, and 3 more...

Gonna have to give you this one, that title translation is good shit lol

Base +6, ShiroiHebi +24, The14thNoah +12, Isolation_Q +9, SSBDeft +6, gotl +16, Zakuzelo +14, SavageBlowJob +7, DoeJohnshi +6

One hit wonder is nice too, no need to stress yourself over a hobby. Anyway, have a good day.
P/s: Nice job with the title

Base +7, ShiroiHebi +24, rubyhiro +7

I'm not sure 11 has really become more readable.
When I searched it, I expected "Cicisbeo" to not appear in the online dictionary I was using, and that I would have to look for it into urbandictionary.

Base +28

Title made me expect Saren/Mimi.

Weirded out that the "item" appears to be Io's TAIL...

Base +7

Huh? NTR? Where?

Base +6, player4578 -6, AShavedBver +6, m42a +18

Good job and everything but, is the "kei" from your discord tag all capitalized or ???

Base +5, TheFoolWhoDreamz +2

"Thank you, myself."
That is the sort of self-esteem we should all have!

Base +10, DoeJohnshi +6

Man that was fantastic, thanks for the translation!

Base +6, luckyhusky +5

It isn't netorare.

I get that Yuuki is supposed to be her romantic interest, but he's nowhere to be seen and not mentioned. So no, it's not netorare.

Base +11, Hyoros -16, player4578 -6, Juggernaut Santa +32

Thank you so much, I've been waiting for an alternative translation ever since the superior translation came out.

Base +6, DoeJohnshi +6, Hyoros -16

i had to stop and laugh when i read him screaming this is child abuse

Base +9

The story isn't so much arousing as it is unique and entertaining.
Really good job on the first time translation. It came out very well and all of the hours of hard work out into it show.

Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 4. Translation 8. All out of 10.

Base +9

It's not NTR because he's her baby.

Base +6

People confused about why it's tagged NTR: It's not just Saren's canonical offscreen lover - the dialogue mentions that the male here is doing some cucking. That's what that obscure word "cicisbeo" means in page 11. Wikipedia says this "was the man who was the professed gallant or lover of a woman married to someone else. With the knowledge and consent of the husband, the cicisbeo attended his mistress at public entertainments, to church and other occasions, and had privileged access to this woman."

However, this likely means the translation is WRONG, because consent of the husband would be netorase, not netorare - and this is obviously not a consensual arrangement. Dear translator, if you insist on flexing your obscure loan-word vocabulary, please at least make sure to use the words correctly.

Base +6

I really hope someone helps you with proofreading and you comeback to make corrections. The grammar isn't the worst I've seen lately, but most of the mistakes would have been easily caught. Someone checking the script before you typeset or having a quality control person checking before you post would probably gotten most of them.

Base +11