buy the source material

https://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ520829.html
https://book.dmm.co.jp/detail/k568agotp00422/

bad mc so I changed some of his lines, tagged as rewrite.
complaints can be sent to recycle bin.

then also be fucked to add rewrite into the tittle you bastard

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I'd buy the source material if it was in English. Unfortunately it isn't. Dick.

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>cOmpLaIntS cAn bE seNt to ReCycLe BiN
Neck yourself.

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>complaints can be sent to recycle bin
I've heard your mother complaints about you a lot and regret giving birth to you.

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Can you please translate more of Arima Kouichi?

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>complaints can be sent to recycle bin
You disgust me...

But well, seems way more of quality than recents shit MTL so I'll let this one pass.

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That recycle bin must be getting pretty full.

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If the mc was supposed to be an idiot or not, that's on the author. Sorry translators but you need to translate.

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So you made a rewrite before an actual translation (and there is still no English translation available AFAIK)... just because you didn't like the MC?

Motherfucker, this isn't a fanfic site. Butchering my tomboy material like that? May your dick get caught inside of a waffle maker that's turned on.

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This is why we hate localizer not translator.

@loulou0501
Better stay virgin than become a chad but cannot appreciate the author work and choose this localized version instead.

Last edited on 24 June 2022, 22:00.

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I can't believe "people" are this pissy about a slightly different line on porn
do you all have erectile dysfunction?

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Damn dude... Could you please make a more reliable translation of this work? I'm doing translations from English into other languages and rewrites are not particularly suitable for this. This is not a complaint, but a sincere request. I really love this author and have been waiting for the translation of this work. Hope for understanding.

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"Rewrite" is an upload option, equivalent to the "original" and "translated" options right next to it, but people in the comments here act like it's a crime to make one. Guess that's what years of having to tag things as rewrite in lieu of the not yet existing rough translation tag did to their perception.

If you don't like it, consider:
1) putting it on the fucking blacklist like anything else you don't want to see instead of bitching about it.
2) thinking about why "Rewrite" is an upload option if it's not legitimate output, if your poor brain can handle that much thinking.

Last edited on 20 June 2022, 19:59.

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I enjoyed it.

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Garbage rewrite. I hope your family gets cancer.

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Not sure why the virgins on this site are always crying and shitting themselves ( must be because they are virgins)... But this might be the most realistic and least stupid dialogues i have seen in a hentai thus far. Actually a breath of fresh air. So ignoring the idiots above, i'll say good job.

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No idea what the comments are about, maybe it got updated in the meantime...
It's a really nice read, vanilla tomboy. Good shit.

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