I... I like you! Eh...? If it's okay with you, P-Please go out with me!
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Hmm... それで? 私とどんな事したいの? → And, have you got any plans for me? We can go see a movie or to an amusement park... Then? After that...Umm Do something naughty? I guessed right, no?
.... Use center text for typesetting, not left align. If you totally don't know Japanese, get better at editing and help the translator with no editor that would be great or simply learn the language first and come again.
It doesn't really read the absolute worst for an edited MTL, but the typesetting definitely feels like it needs some work; center alignment probably would be a good start, left just doesn't feel right to read.