I can't believe that years ago "that" passed as a translation.

Anyway, with this, I believe there's no more YD (fate related) doujins to decensor(?) so I think that's all for me, until another Fate doujin

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Thank you for the good work!

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Just perfect. But shoes off on bed!

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Father ? I don't remember him calling her like that

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Coffedrug, my man. This looks 100% better color, de-censor, and type setting wise. It looks really, really good!

However, saying that you "can't believe 'that' passed as a translation" is honestly pretty r00d when your upload has much more awkward / stilted English and phrasing.

Gallery /g/1966925/a6fee53770/ reads a LOT better phrasing-wise. Sure, the setting is done with Manga Temple and the decensoring is automated, but it READS very well.

Again, this is a VERY, VERY much better version visually, but you're Japanese to English phrasing still needs work.

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Quartz Saint, my man

Did you read the raw? maybe english phrasing-wise is better, but it's almost like a rewrite

and

>english problems
well... yeah? I mean, I'm not native, but this went to proofreading and QC, and neither of them had problems with that, and believe me, I let them change anything... because again I mean.... yeah? I'm not native.

you're going to ask "are they native?" I believe so, to this day I haven't been marked as "poor grammar" again thanks to them.

Anyway, sorry, but I won't reply back again, this is a what? 4 years gallery? and I did this mainly to have the dencensor. It's fine if you prefer the other gallery

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For those wondering about the "Father" thing, it's based on a Japanese pun.
Lancer Artoria's Fan Nickname is "Chichi-ue", which means "father", because she's Mordred's clone-daddy.
But the character for "chichi" they use is the same as the one used for "tits", because... well, because her chest is much larger as a Lancer than as a Saber.

So LArtoria is "Father", and I'm not sure how that pun would work in English.

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